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		<title>78. Gamble on the Redeemer: Culture and Bible Translation</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Meaning is Determined by Culture I recently gave a message from the book of Ruth focusing on the meaning of the Hebrew concept of go’el, the &#8220;kinsman–redeemer&#8221; (NIV), which is one of the key themes of the book.  While struggling to find the best way to communicate the reality that the meaning of the term [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<h3>Meaning is Determined by Culture</h3>
<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-623" title="ruth21" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/ruth21.png" alt="ruth21" width="150" height="221" align="left" />I recently gave a message from the book of Ruth focusing on the meaning of the Hebrew concept of <em>go’el</em>, the &#8220;kinsman–redeemer&#8221; (NIV), which is one of the key themes of the book.  While struggling to find the best way to communicate the reality that the meaning of the term is dependent upon the underlying cultural context, I realized that a comparison of Bible versions provided a means to that end, while also revealing the difficulties of the task of Bible translation.  The diversity between the translations also underscores the importance of comparing translations when studying the Bible in order to come to a fuller understanding.  The translations used are Today’s New International Version (TNIV), Today’s English Version (TEV) and the English Standard Version (ESV).  Exegetical and cultural analysis is used to demonstrate how the underlying context determines the meaning of the verse.  The examples also serve to illustrate the contrast between the translation principles used by these versions.</p>
<h3>Naomi’s Intention &#8211; Ruth 3:1</h3>
<blockquote><p>One day Naomi, Ruth’s mother-in-law, said to her, &#8220;My daughter, I must find a <em><strong>home</strong></em> for you, where you will be <em><strong>well provided for</strong></em>. (TNIV)</p>
<p>Some time later Naomi said to Ruth, “I must find a <em><strong>husband</strong></em> for you, so that you will have a <em><strong>home</strong></em> of your own. (TEV)</p>
<p>Then Naomi her mother-in-law said to her, “My daughter, should I not seek <em><strong>rest</strong></em> for you, that it may be <strong><em>well with you</em></strong>? (ESV)</p>
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<p>All three translations communicate the basic idea that Naomi’s concern is to secure Ruth’s future. The translation of “rest” (ESV) comes from the idea of “resting place,” or a permanent residence, thus the translation of “home” in the TNIV and TEV.  The translation of the ESV connects the underlying Hebrew word to other references, such as Deut 28:65, which refers to a “resting place for the sole of your foot,” a Hebrew idiom for a permanent residence.<sup><strong><strong><strong><a id="ref1" href="#ftn1"><strong>1</strong></a></strong></strong></strong></sup> A key theme of the Old Testament and of Ruth is the “land,” and the identity and security that comes from having a recognized family or tribal plot.  The strength of the ESV translation is the theme of “rest,” which resonates strongly with the nation of Israel’s history as a people in search of a place to call their own (Deut 26:5, Heb 11:9).  The weakness is that the meaning of the idiom does not carry over clearly to the modern English reader.  A natural understanding of Ruth 3:1 from the ESV would be that Naomi is concerned about how hard Ruth is working gleaning the crops, as described in chapter 2.  She would rather Ruth “rest the sole of her foot” by sitting down and relaxing.  However, that would be a misreading of the text.</p>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">The <em>meaning</em> of Naomi’s statement&#8230; is the intent to provide Ruth with a husband</p>
<p>On the other hand, the TEV picks up on the broader theme of patriarchy.  Security and identity (ie. the essence of the concern for “rest”) for the women in that culture depended upon their relationship with the male members of their family.  Without that connection, there was no future or meaning to a woman’s life.  Naomi could not even redeem the land that was in her husband’s name (Ruth 4).  This is the point of chapter one in which Naomi’s disaster of losing all her immediate male relatives is recorded.  It is the reason for her insistence that Orpah and Ruth return to their Moabite families.  Patriarchy, as a defining aspect of the culture of that day, is illustrated well by the description given in Deuteronomy 23 that only adult male Israelites were counted as citizens of the nation. Thus, Naomi’s concern for security and identity for her daughter-in-law in this verse is ultimately dependent upon Ruth’s relationship to a man.  The <em>meaning</em> of Naomi’s statement, which is evident from the following events, is the intent to provide Ruth with a husband.</p>
<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">the meaning of any text does not primarily reside in the individual words</p>
<p>These versions illustrate well the reality that the meaning of any text does not primarily reside in the individual words, nor even in the syntax that relates the words to each other, but in the underlying culture.  Language is a window onto the relationships, values, beliefs and worldview of a people group, but without an appropriate level of understanding of the cultural context, the meaning of any given text cannot be understood.  However, once the original context is understood, translators are able to present the meaning as related text in another language and context.  In particular, the TEV, by recognizing that the meaning of Naomi’s statement is highly dependent upon the context within which she speaks to Ruth, is able to communicate the intent of the passage cross-culturally in a way that is clear to the modern English reader.</p>
<h3>Ruth’s Intention &#8211; Ruth 3:9</h3>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;I am your servant Ruth,&#8221; she said. &#8220;<em><strong>Spread the corner of your garment</strong></em> over me, since you are a <em><strong>family guardian</strong></em>.&#8221; (TNIV)</p>
<p>“It&#8217;s Ruth, sir,” she answered. “Because you are a <em><strong>close relative</strong></em>, you are <em><strong>responsible for taking care of me. So please marry me</strong></em>.” (TEV)</p>
<p>“I am Ruth, your servant. <em><strong>Spread your wings</strong></em> over your servant, for you are a <em><strong>redeemer</strong></em>.” (ESV)</p>
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<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-629" title="ruth_boaz" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/ruth_boaz.jpg" alt="ruth_boaz" width="240" height="167" align="left" />In this verse, the ESV and the TNIV have chosen different vowel markings to determine the translation of “wings” or “garment.”<sup><strong><strong><strong><a id="ref2" href="#ftn2"><strong>2</strong></a></strong></strong></strong></sup> The phrase is a Hebrew idiom without natural correspondence in the receptor English language, and so the TEV provides the meaning as “taking care of me.”  Moreover, in order to clarify the meaning as it relates to the cultural drama being played out in this passage, the TEV explicitly states: “please marry me.”  For the modern English audience, the scenario of a woman secretly coming to a man in the middle of the night can be easily misunderstood. In placing herself in a vulnerable and potentially disastrous situation, Ruth was not being sexually provocative (<em>a la</em> Hollywood).  Her intention was to cast herself upon the mercy of a patriarch in hopes that he would take the one action that would provide her with the status and identity that gave meaning and security to women in that culture – as a wife. Once again, the full meaning of the Ruth’s plea is tied to the context in which the words are said.</p>
<p><img class="alignright size-full wp-image-634" title="goel" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/goel.jpg" alt="goel" width="150" height="81" align="left" />The term translated as “family guardian” (TNIV), “close relative” (TEV) or “redeemer” (ESV) proved to be an extremely difficult concept to represent in our Sindhi Bible translation, and we spent hours trying to shape the text in a way that would do it justice.  The problem is that this concept is absent in both Sindhi and English cultures.  No one word or phrase can carry the weight of meaning represented by four Hebrew letters (<em>go’el</em>). Furthermore, the meaning of the word is, as with the examples above, revealed only through an understanding of the cultural dynamic.  The male members of the Israelite community of that time had all the rights and powers.  Even as the branches of a tree only remain green when attached to the trunk, so women and children were totally dependent upon the patriarch of the family.  Only the patriarch had the power to rescue the female members of the family and raise them to a position of honor and security.  This function of the patriarch was so crucial to the life of the Israelites that they had a separate term (<em>go’el</em>) to describe it.</p>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">this phrase does not plumb the depth of meaning and significance the concept held for Naomi</p>
<p>ESV’s “redeemer” captures the power to ransom, but does not communicate the important family aspect.  TEV’s “close relative” provides the family connection, but does not communicate the power of the patriarch that makes this relationship significant.  TNIV is perhaps the best by providing a phrase that communicates both sides of the concept with “family guardian.”  But even this phrase does not plumb the depth of meaning and significance the concept held for Naomi in Ruth 2:20 when she first holds out hope of deliverance, or for Ruth in Ruth 3:9 when she uses the term to ensure her actions are put in the right context.  It is the importance and significance of that patriarchal role that allowed Ruth to make such a high stakes gamble upon the redeemer.</p>
<h3>Boaz’s Intention &#8211; Ruth 3:10</h3>
<blockquote><p>3:10 &#8220;The LORD bless you, my daughter,&#8221; he replied. &#8220;This <strong><em>kindness</em></strong> is greater than that which <em><strong>you showed earlier</strong></em>: You have not run after the younger men, whether rich or poor. (TNIV)</p>
<p>“The Lord bless you,” he said. “You are showing even greater <em><strong>family loyalty</strong></em> in what you are doing now than in <em><strong>what you did for your mother-in-law</strong></em>. You might have gone looking for a young man, either rich or poor, but you haven&#8217;t. (TEV)</p>
<p>And he said, “May you be blessed by the LORD, my daughter. You have made this last <em><strong>kindness</strong></em> greater than the <em><strong>first</strong></em> in that you have not gone after young men, whether poor or rich. (ESV)</p>
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<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">Family Loyalty</p>
<p>The word translated as “kindness” (ESV, TNIV) and “family loyalty” (TEV) is another term that refuses easy interlingual transference of meaning.  Similar to the previous examples, this is a concept dependent upon the relationships and values of that culture.  The Hebrew word is <em>chesed</em> and refers to love expressed by loyalty and “faithfulness to a promise or a covenant,”<strong><sup><a id="ref3" href="#ftn3"><strong>3</strong></a></sup></strong> despite the cost to oneself.  It goes deeper than kindness by being an action that faithfully affirms, supports and builds up the community.  Thus David’s common plea in the Psalms for God to save him for “the sake of your <em>steadfast love</em>” (Ps 6:4 &#8211; ESV), which is an appeal based on God’s mercy and faithfulness towards the people that he has chosen for his own.</p>
<p>Naomi and Ruth live in a communally oriented society and the value of faithfulness and personal sacrifice for others in the clan is greatly appreciated by Boaz.  The “first” (ESV) or “earlier” (TNIV) kindness refers to the “family loyalty” shown to Naomi (as made clear in the TEV).  That is, Boaz is not praising Ruth for being <em>kind</em> to her mother-in-law, so much as he is affirming her decision and action to maintain <em>family loyalty</em>.<strong><sup><a id="ref4" href="#ftn4"><strong>4</strong></a></sup></strong> It is this value that he praises her for when she approaches him.  Because her husband had been a close relative of Boaz, marriage to Ruth and the resulting progeny would allow the name of the father to continue on.  The sensitivity of Ruth to hold this as a worthy value to live by is what gives her actions the meaning and impact that propelled Boaz to action.</p>
<p>&#8220;Family loyalty,&#8221; which is expressed through marriage to a deceased husband&#8217;s relative, is not a western value.  Yet it is integral to the cultural dynamic of this story of the interaction between Ruth and Boaz. It provides the meaning and significance both to their dialogue and to their actions. Thus, it is incumbent upon the Bible translator, whose goal is communication, to provide appropriate clues within the forms of the receptor language that will enable the reader to comprehend those cultural aspects from which the biblical text derives its meaning.</p>
<h3>The Language of Culture</h3>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">Culture is, in and of itself, a language</p>
<p>Culture is, in and of itself, a language.  It is a communication of order and significance that define the relationships we experience, whether with our environment or with each other.  Any written text that provides a description of relationships, beliefs or narrative is one expression of the deeper and fuller sense that resides within the culture itself.  Communication, and thus Bible translation, is dependent upon clarity concerning cultural dynamics, for that is where meaning ultimately lies.  God speaks his word in and through the medium that provides meaning and significance to those being addressed. That medium is their culture.</p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>For further articles on Bible translation, see the</em><em> </em><a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/archives/category/bible-translation" target="_blank"><em>CCI Archives</em></a><em>.<br />
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<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>For information on Mark&#8217;s Bible translation in the Sindhi Language see</em><em> </em><a href="http://www.nbseminary.com/church-health/cild/cild_sindhibible/" target="_blank"><em>Sindhi Bible Translation.</em></a></span></p>
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<li><a id="ftn1" href="#ref1">1</a> Bratcher, R.G. and Hatton, H.A. 2000. A Handbook on Deuteronomy. New York: United Bible Societies. Deu. 28:65. (Unicode version).</li>
<li><a id="ftn2" href="#ref2">2</a> The original Hebrew does not contain vowel markings, which can determine the meaning of a word.</li>
<li><a id="ftn3" href="#ref3">3</a> Bratcher, R.G. and Reyburn, W.D. 1991. A Handbook on The Book of Psalms. New York: United Bible Societies. Ps. 5:7. (Unicode version).</li>
<li><a id="ftn4" href="#ref4">4</a> deWaard, J. and Nida, E.A. 1992, 1978. A Handbook on Ruth. New York: United Bible Societies. Ruth 3:10. (Unicode version).</li>
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		<title>72. Which Bible Version is Superior? 3. How Culture Affects Bible Translation</title>
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		<pubDate>Sun, 01 Mar 2009 14:46:54 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Naylor</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Both literal or &#8220;word for word&#8221; translations as well as meaning-based or &#8220;thought for thought&#8221; translations are legitimate representations of the original biblical manuscripts. Each style of translation has strengths and weaknesses in providing readers access to the content of the biblical writings in their own language. The argument in these articles is that a [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>Both literal or &#8220;word for word&#8221; translations as well as meaning-based or &#8220;thought for thought&#8221; translations are legitimate representations of the original biblical manuscripts. Each style of translation has strengths and weaknesses in providing readers access to the content of the biblical writings in their own language. The argument in these articles is that a common claim that literal translations are superior to meaning-based translations is incorrect and can be harmful to the body of Christ. Because literal translations often obscure the meaning for the average reader, insistence on using those versions exclusively or primarily serves to keep people from engaging God&#8217;s word with the clarity offered by meaning-based versions.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>Both translation orientations are found in all Bible versions and so, strictly speaking, it is misleading to label a version &#8220;literal&#8221; or &#8220;meaning-based.&#8221; Literal versions also consider what the translation will mean in the receptor language, and meaning-based versions often provide translation through which the reader may recognize words and structures of the original languages. </em></span><span style="color: #008000;"><em>(see the <a href="http://www.ibs.org/bibles/translations/">IBS English Bible Translation Comparison chart </a>in which versions are charted according to their &#8220;degree of literalness.&#8221;) </em></span><span style="color: #008000;"><em>The following articles seek to show that the &#8220;degree of literalness&#8221; is unrelated to the accuracy of translation and should not be used to judge one version as more the word of God than another. Accuracy must be gauged according to the success of any translation to communicate the </em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">message</span><em> of the original manuscripts to its intended audience.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>In these articles &#8220;version&#8221; (n) refers to a complete translated text like the NRSV (literal version) or CEV (meaning-based version), while &#8220;translation&#8221; (n) refers to the text within the version. For example, any </em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">version</span><em>, whether labeled &#8220;literal&#8221; or &#8220;meaning-based&#8221; will have both styles of </em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">translation</span><em>.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em> The author of the articles has been involved in Bible translation as supervisor of the Sindhi translation project for the Pakistan Bible Society during the past 18 years.</em></span></p>
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<h3>3. How Culture Affects Bible Translation</h3>
<h3>Reading in a fog</h3>
<p>
<input class="alignright size-full wp-image-421" title="two-bibles" alt="two-bibles" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/two-bibles.jpg" type="image" />My son had two small New Testaments in his room.  I picked up one and without noting the version (it was NKJV<strong><sup><a id="ref1" href="#ftn1"><strong>1</strong></a></sup></strong>) began to read from Ephesians 3.  Both my son and I struggled to make sense of the passage. It was like driving through fog: possible, but lacking the comfortableness of clarity.  A couple of nights later I picked up the other small New Testament and discovered that it was the Contemporary English Version (CEV).  I re-read the same passage and the ease of clarity made it feel like we were driving down that same road on a bright summer day.  Because we did not have to struggle with the meaning, the relevance of the passage was easily accessible.  Compare for yourself:</p>
<blockquote><p>NKJV:</p>
<p>For this reason I, Paul, the prisoner of Christ Jesus for you Gentiles&#8211;if indeed you have heard of the dispensation of the grace of God which was given to me for you, how that by revelation He made known to me the mystery (as I have briefly written already, by which, when you read, you may understand my knowledge in the mystery of Christ), which in other ages was not made known to the sons of men, as it has now been revealed by the Spirit to His holy apostles and prophets: that the Gentiles should be fellow heirs, of the same body, and partakers of His promise in Christ through the gospel, of which I became a minister according to the gift of the grace of God given to me by the effective working of His power.</p>
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<blockquote><p>CEV:</p>
<p>Christ Jesus made me his prisoner, so that I could help you Gentiles. You have surely heard about God&#8217;s kindness in choosing me to help you. In fact, this letter tells you a little about how God has shown me his mysterious ways. As you read the letter, you will also find out how well I really do understand the mystery about Christ. No one knew about this mystery until God&#8217;s Spirit told it to his holy apostles and prophets. And the mystery is this: Because of Christ Jesus, the good news has given the Gentiles a share in the promises that God gave to the Jews. God has also let the Gentiles be part of the same body.</p>
<p>God treated me with kindness. His power worked in me, and it became my job to spread the good news.</p>
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<h3><em>Either</em> clarity <em>Or</em> word-for-word</h3>
<p>If the purpose of translation is a representation of the form and structure of the original text, then the NKJV is the better translation.  However, if the point is communication and ease in understanding the message, then the CEV is clearly superior.  But can&#8217;t a translation have <em>both</em> word-for-word correspondence <em>and</em> ease of understanding; does it have to be either-or?  Unfortunately, due to the nature of language and culture, “either-or” is the norm in Bible translation.</p>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">there is an inverse relationship between &#8230; “word-for-word” correspondence and the communication of meaning</p>
<p>The English Standard Version (ESV), according to the preface on its website, “is an ‘essentially literal’ translation” that emphasizes “word-for-word” correspondence, in order to “be transparent to the original text, letting the reader see as directly as possible the structure and meaning of the original.”<strong><strong><a id="ref2" href="#ftn2"><sup><strong>2</strong></sup></a></strong></strong> However, unfortunately for literal translations, there is an inverse relationship between maintaining the structure of the original text with “word-for-word” correspondence and the communication of meaning. To the extent that a translation maintains original structure and words, it fails to provide the meaning.  Therefore, to claim direct access to both structure and meaning is oxymoronic. It is only by using the target language structure and words (i.e., the language of the reader) that communication is achieved.</p>
<p>
<input class="alignright size-medium wp-image-424" title="pakistan-lahore-madrassa-1" alt="pakistan-lahore-madrassa-1" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/pakistan-lahore-madrassa-1-300x210.jpg" type="image" />Like rote learning, repetition of the words does not guarantee comprehension.  It is only by “putting it into your own (culture’s) words” that meaning is ensured.  In the Sindh, many young boys go to school in madrassas where they memorize the Quran in word perfect Arabic.  Such a stress on the purity of the original text, while impressive, fails to result in comprehension, for they do not speak Arabic.</p>
<h3>Cut and Uncut diamonds</h3>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">literal versions of the Bible often under translate</p>
<p>In a <a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/archives/130" target="_blank">previous article</a>, I argued that there are no pure synonyms between languages; no two words will have exactly the same range of nuance.  I further argued that individual words do not carry meaning in and of themselves, but only in their relationship to other words in the sentence, and this relationship varies from language to language.  I also pointed out that information common to the original author and audience is often kept implicit in the text and thus unavailable to the uninitiated reader.  As a result, I concluded that literal versions of the Bible often <em>under translate </em>and thus fail to communicate (and occasionally miscommunicate) the meaning to their intended audience.<strong><sup><a id="ref3" href="#ftn3"><strong>3</strong></a></sup></strong> They seek to avoid the accusation of misrepresenting the original text, thus resulting in a rendering that is often obscure.</p>
<p>Meaning based translations, on the other hand, deliberately choose to be precise for the sake of clarity, thus running a greater danger of misinterpretation. Literal translations can claim greater accuracy in reflecting form and structure of the original text as well as maintaining a broad possibility of nuance in the text. Meaning based translations, by limiting the possible meanings through clarification, have the greater potential to communicate the message of the text.</p>
<p>
<input class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-426" title="diamond-uncut" alt="diamond-uncut" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/diamond-uncut-300x224.jpg" type="image" />
<input class="alignright size-medium wp-image-427" title="diamond" alt="diamond" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/diamond-300x265.jpg" type="image" />Literal translations are like uncut diamonds, no part is left out, but the beauty is hidden. Meaning based translations are like cut diamonds, they are shaped in order to reveal the inner light.  The value and potential of the uncut diamond requires an expert eye to be appreciated, the beauty of the cut diamond is available for all who can see.  On the other hand, shaping a diamond means that certain aspects are sacrificed in order to create an attractive diamond, while an uncut diamond maintains all the possible configurations that the artisan can discover.</p>
<h3>Textual meaning is determined by culture</h3>
<p>I would like to develop a point hinted at in that previous article:  <em>Language cannot be understood apart from its relationship to the surrounding context</em>.  Naomi’s rationale in sending her daughters-in-law back to their own people by asking, “Am I going to give birth to more sons?” (Ruth 1:11), can only be understood in the context of a patriarchal society in which a woman’s identity is dependent upon her relationship to a man.  Paul’s vow to cut his hair (Acts 18:18) cannot be comprehended without a perspective on how vows functioned in that society, how hair could be part of a vow and what the significance of such an act would mean for the participants.  All these background realities are tied up in the culture <em>which gives the text its meaning</em>.</p>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">culture &#8230; gives the text its meaning</p>
<p>Belief that literal translations are more accurate renderings of God’s word than meaning based translations is based on a misunderstanding of culture and language.  As a representation of the form and structure of the original language, the claim is true, but not in the arena of communicating the message. The idea that a reproduction of linguistic forms coupled with word-for-word correspondence will also provide accuracy and clarity in <em>meaning</em> is based on the mistaken assumption that cultures (including languages) are basically synonymous with each other.  If that were true then people of all times and places would think similar thoughts in similar ways with similar priorities for similar purposes, the only difference being the linguistic symbols used to express those thoughts. Where this naïve and mechanistic approach to translation breaks down is in the reality that cultures (including languages) are very different from each other; people do not think in synonymous patterns using equivalent concepts.  Even when the language is the same, indicating significant overlap of meaning between groups of people, cultures have their distinct values and ways of thinking that affect the nuances of their speech.</p>
<p>Therefore, getting closer to the original biblical language <em>structure</em> does not guarantee that the reader is better able to access the original <em>meaning</em>.  In fact, because of the great discrepancy between cultures, concepts, language structures and idiomatic usage, faithfulness to the original form is more likely to <em>obscure</em> the meaning for the reader – in the same way that an uncut diamond does not impress the uninitiated.</p>
<h3>Ignore or Bridge the Gap</h3>
<p>
<input class="alignright size-medium wp-image-430" title="16-1_ruth_ruth_and_naomi_gleaning_in_the_fields" alt="16-1_ruth_ruth_and_naomi_gleaning_in_the_fields" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/16-1_ruth_ruth_and_naomi_gleaning_in_the_fields-300x225.jpg" type="image" />As an example, the Old Testament cannot be translated without a clear understanding of the ancient patriarchal assumptions of Hebrew society. If the translation is into a language with different cultural assumptions, such as the egalitarian orientation in Canadian society, miscommunication can easily occur. In Naomi’s case above, the average Canadian will sympathize with Naomi’s loss of husband and sons, but will not comprehend the implications of that loss and therefore miss a crucial point of the story.  The English translation of the book of Ruth necessarily uses words and concepts that, for the Canadian reader, derive their meaning from our <em>egalitarian context</em> and will be read that way.  But Naomi is not a woman <em>with an individual identity</em> who has suffered a great loss.  She is a woman who has <em>lost her identity</em> and purpose, because in a patriarchal system these aspects of a woman’s being are dependent upon her relationship with a man – father, husband or son.  Without this basic understanding a key redemptive phrase of the book cannot be properly understood: “Blessed is the LORD who has not left you without a redeemer today” (ESV), clarified in the TEV as “Praise the Lord! He has given you a grandson today to take care of you.”  Through the blessing of a male heir, Naomi has received a &#8220;redemption&#8221; that has meaning within the patriarchal context: her identity has been restored.</p>
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<input class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-432" title="bridge-the-gap-failed" alt="bridge-the-gap-failed" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/bridge-the-gap-failed-300x222.jpg" type="image" />The translator cannot assume that communication of this essential point will occur through a literal translation because the cultural assumptions are vastly different.  There is a cultural gap that needs to be bridged in order for comprehension to occur.  Literal translations by design <em>ignore</em> the cultural gap and leave it to the reader to reach the correct interpretation.  Such translations are not <em>incorrect</em>, but they are <em>incomplete</em> and rely upon the ability of the reader to come to the right conclusion through knowledge obtained <em>outside</em> the text.  Meaning based translations, on the other hand, seek to <em>bridge the cultural gap</em>.  The danger for this translation style, on the other hand, is misinterpretation, which may lead the reader astray, if the translators have not taken the appropriate care to ensure correct communication.</p>
<h3>Is the cultural gap that serious?</h3>
<p>In the modern world of globalization, translation is a daily reality for most people and seems relatively uncomplicated.  A world leader speaks on the newscast and a voiceover provides the translation.  We often read translated material in our newspapers and books.  Why should this not be the same for the Bible? Is the cultural gap really that difficult to bridge?</p>
<p>Three important aspects need to be kept in mind concerning the translation of news stories and voiceovers in the modern context:</p>
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<li>The translator is usually completely bilingual and familiar with both cultural contexts, and thus able to provide the phrasing required for mutual understanding in both societies.</li>
<li>Cultural contexts in this modern era of globalization have many points of commonality and understanding, or at lease exposure, in crucial areas such as technology, politics, ethical norms, and assumptions, due to ongoing exposure and interaction.</li>
<li>When errors in translation do occur, they can be quickly corrected, or at least have alternatives pointed out by others who are equally expert in understanding both languages and cultures.</li>
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<p>Bible translation does not have these advantages.  The original languages of the Bible are <em>dead</em> languages.  They are dead because their cultures are dead.  The biblical cultures, which provided the meaning to those languages, do not exist any longer. There are no longer people living in the cultures of the Old Testament or the New Testament to whom we can refer for understanding. Even the resurrection of the Hebrew language in modern Israel does not imply that they are better able to understand the ancient Hebrew writings. The modern context of Israel is a vastly different cultural context and does not provide a framework within which the meaning of the ancient text can be discerned. As a result we must rely on scholarship <em>outside</em> the text in order to reveal its meaning.</p>
<h3>Remain mute when you talk!</h3>
<p>
<input class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-435" title="jacob_with_laban_and_daughters-400" alt="jacob_with_laban_and_daughters-400" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/jacob_with_laban_and_daughters-400-300x231.jpg" type="image" />This reality is particularly evident in the use of metaphors and idioms. A recent dialogue on Gen 31:24 in the Bible Translation chat room illustrates this point.  God commands Laban when confronting Jacob to be “careful not to say anything to Jacob, either good or bad” (ESV).  This literal translation of an ancient Hebrew idiom is not understandable in our modern English context.  The natural understanding according to modern English usage would be that Laban is instructed to remain mute, not uttering any words at all.  What the ESV has refused to do is to bridge the cultural gap, leaving the reader with only their own context to interpret this saying.  Because the modern context is vastly different from Jacob&#8217;s era, there will likely be misinterpretation.</p>
<p>Meaning based translations, on the other hand, will translate using the idiom of the <em>target</em> language.  That is, they will choose a wording that relates to the linguistic norms of the <em>readers</em>’ culture.  By doing the work of bridging the cultural gap, translators allow the reader to read according to the way their language is normally used, and through this process communication is achieved.  For example, the TEV reads, “Be careful not to threaten Jacob in any way.”<strong><strong><a id="ref4" href="#ftn4"><sup><strong>4</strong></sup></a></strong></strong></p>
<h3>Communication requires bridging the gap</h3>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">The scholarly checks and balances of a translation team are far more likely to produce the right meaning</p>
<p>The meaning of the text is found within the relationship of the language to the culture.  Therefore when the culture gap is large between reader and the culture within which the text has meaning – as it is for the biblical text &#8211; it cannot be bridged by the average reader without interpretive help.  While it is correct that “ ‘thought-for-thought’ [meaning based] translation is of necessity more inclined to reflect the interpretive opinions of the translator and the influences of contemporary culture,”<strong><sup><a id="ref5" href="#ftn5"><strong>5</strong></a></sup></strong> it must be realized that without an interpretative approach that expresses the text within the forms of contemporary culture, there cannot be communication of meaning.  The scholarly checks and balances of a translation team are far more likely to produce the right meaning than the intuitive assumptions of the uninformed readers who can only read Scripture through the interpretive grid of their own culture.  The choice in Bible versions is not between “accuracy” and “interpretive,” but between a lack of clarity requiring exegetical skill beyond that of the average reader, and the communication of meaning in a way that has impact and clarity.</p>
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<li><a id="ftn1" href="#ref1">1</a> The advertisement from the publishers states that “Only the New King James Version offers precision and clarity without sacrificing readability” at http://www.thomasnelson.com/consumer/dept.asp?dept_id=19700&amp;TopLevel_id=190000 accessed Feb 12, 2009.</li>
<li><a id="ftn2" href="#ref2">2</a> http://www.gnpcb.org/esv/preface/ accessed Feb 12, 2009.</li>
<li><a id="ftn3" href="#ref3">3</a> In their preface (see previous footnote), the ESV phrases this weakness positively: “the ESV seeks to carry over every possible nuance of meaning in the original words of Scripture into our own language,” without recognizing that a lack of preciseness is another way to define the failure to communicate.</li>
<li><a id="ftn4" href="#ref4">4</a> The SIL &#8216;Translator&#8217;s Notes&#8217; say: <em>Be careful not to say anything</em>: The Hebrew verb literally means &#8220;to say.&#8221;  However, when used with the word <em>hiHamer</em> &#8220;keep, guard, be careful&#8221; it has the sense of &#8220;threaten.&#8221; Taken from Translator’s Workplace, version 4.0 2002 SIL International.</li>
<li><a id="ftn5" href="#ref5">5</a> http://www.esv.org/translation/philosophy accessed Feb 12, 2009.</li>
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		<title>67. What kind of God is that?!</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[What kind of God commands people to strap bombs to their bodies and blow up crowds of people?  What kind of God tells people to drive passenger planes into the sides of buildings?  What kind of God commands parents to kill their children?  What kind of God would come to one of his worshippers and [...]]]></description>
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<p>What kind of God commands people to strap bombs to their bodies and blow up crowds of people?  What kind of God tells people to drive passenger planes into the sides of buildings?  What kind of God commands parents to kill their children?  What kind of God would come to one of his worshippers and say, &#8220;Take your son, your only son, whom you love &#8211; Isaac &#8211; and &#8230; sacrifice him&#8230;&#8221; (Gen 22:2)?<a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/isaac_sacrifice.jpg" rel="lightbox[185]"><img class="size-medium wp-image-196 alignleft" title="isaac_sacrifice" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/isaac_sacrifice-200x300.jpg" alt="" width="144" height="216" /></a></p>
<p>Those of us who believe in God as the loving father of the Lord Jesus Christ quickly rise to the challenge these questions represent and protest that the latter question is in a different category than the first three.  There is a fundamental difference between the God of the Old Testament and the God of terrorists.  Nonetheless, I suspect that the average churchgoer would find it hard to provide a defense or articulate a reasonable distinction. Furthermore, most outsiders to the faith, reading the Genesis passage, would likely categorize the God of Genesis 22 with the God of the first three questions.  One friend of mine described God as &#8220;despot&#8221; and the Bible as &#8220;full of terrors&#8221; because of passages such as the sacrifice of Isaac.</p>
<p>In fact, skeptics often like to pose the question: &#8220;Suppose that God told you to kill your child&#8230;. If you are a God-Fearing Christian, do you have any theological grounds for refusing to kill your own child?&#8221;<strong><sup><a id="ref1" href="#ftn1"><strong>1</strong></a></sup></strong> The <em>correct</em> answer to this question for Christians is to deny that the God of the Bible would require this, and to provide legitimate theological grounds for refusing to do such an evil deed.  But such theology needs to be explained <em>in light of Genesis 22</em>, not by ignoring it.</p>
<h3>A theology <em>about</em> the Bible</h3>
<p>I believe that part of the reason for this uncomfortable comparison of the God of the Bible, particularly the Old Testament, with the God of terrorists is an inadequate theology about the Bible.  In speaking of a theology <em>about</em> the Bible, I am not referring to a biblical theology, that is, a description of God and his relationship to humanity developed from an understanding of biblical <em>content</em>.  Rather, I am referring to an understanding concerning how the Bible <em>functions</em> in shaping our faith.</p>
<p>Wm. Smalley provides a description of how the Bible is used and viewed by people around the world. Some approach the Bible as a <em>cultural artifact</em> of the Christian religion.  Others make magical use of the Bible and view it as a <em>fetish</em>. For many people the Bible is primarily a <em>law book</em> to be obeyed.  Another use of the Bible is as <em>textbook</em> to provide information. Others use the Bible as a <em>reference</em>, to answer the questions they have. Another use of the Bible is as a <em>behavioral manual</em>, a guide in developing moral practice. A common use of the Bible is as a <em>devotional book</em>, a book of worship.  For many people the Bible is an <em>oracle</em>, through which they hear God speak.<strong><strong><strong><a id="ref2" href="#ftn2"><strong>2</strong></a></strong></strong></strong></p>
<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">the Bible should be primarily viewed as <em>revelation</em> of the character, nature and will of God</p>
<p>Without denying the validity of some of the uses mentioned, I would argue that the Bible should be primarily viewed as <em>revelation</em> of the character, nature and will of God.  We need to the approach the Bible for the purpose of understanding who God is and how he relates to us.  It is only through the formulation of biblically shaped perspective of God that we can comprehend who <em>we</em> are: people created in his image.  Genesis 22, then, is not a passage that we are to explain away in order to preserve a prior concept of God, but one through which we develop a better understanding of the God we worship.  However, in order to do this, we must view the passage through the correct &#8220;lenses.&#8221;</p>
<h3>Developing the right exegetical &#8220;lenses&#8221;</h3>
<p><a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/study_frederic_leighton.jpg" rel="lightbox[185]"><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-203" title="study_frederic_leighton" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/study_frederic_leighton-300x264.jpg" alt="" width="240" height="211" /></a>The Islamic understanding of their sacred scriptures, the Koran, is that it is a book that was written in heaven and then dictated to the prophet Mohammed.  It is a book that is 100% divine without any human participation.  Thus, it is pure and holy and untranslatable.  The story is told of a journalist who approached a Muslim cleric and asked for a translation of the Koran that he could read in order to understand it.  He was told, &#8220;There is no translation of the Koran.  You must learn Arabic!&#8221;</p>
<p>The Christian view of the Bible is different.  Christians also believe that the Bible is 100% divine.  But it is <em>also</em> 100% the product of human beings, albeit in a different way. God teaches us his truth, but it only occurs through human language, human understanding and human culture.  In order to communicate, God accommodated to people, he did not command that they accommodate to him. &#8220;Prophets, though human, spoke from God as they were carried along by the Holy Spirit&#8221;  (2 Peter 1:21 TNIV). Moreover, the incarnation is the ultimate accommodation to our need: &#8220;The Word became flesh&#8221; (John 1:14 TNIV). It is the realization that God spoke to people within <em>their</em> language, within <em>their</em> perspective of the world, and within <em>their</em> culture and worldview, that provides the basis for Bible translation. The divine message can be represented in any language, because the original is also not a divine, but a human language.</p>
<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">The divine message can be represented in any language</p>
<p>Furthermore, this human cultural dynamic of the biblical passage provides us with the &#8220;lenses&#8221; through which we can properly understand what on earth God was doing when he said to Abraham, &#8220;Sacrifice your son.&#8221;</p>
<h3>Cultural Contrast</h3>
<p>Abraham was surrounded by gods.  He was in Canaan and the Canaanites had many gods: mountain gods, river gods, fertility gods, and gods of war.  Abraham&#8217;s understanding of the gods came from the context in which he lived.  His relationship and response to the God who had chosen him was shaped by the worldview that he lived in.  For the people of that time, the most powerful god could do the greatest things, and the most powerful god demanded the greatest sacrifice.  Some of those gods demanded human sacrifice &#8211; Molech is the best known &#8211; because they demanded the best.</p>
<p>It may have been a surprise to Abraham to receive this command.  But, as far as Abraham knew, it was not out of character for the way gods acted.  He wasn&#8217;t shocked.  He didn&#8217;t go through a lot of soul searching.  He didn&#8217;t argue with God.  He didn&#8217;t look for a way out. Instead, &#8220;early the next morning&#8221; he set out to fulfill this command. Why would he do this? Because in Abraham&#8217;s world this was consistent with the way gods acted. The greatest god demanded the greatest sacrifice, and God was proving to Abraham that he was the greatest God. Abraham obeyed without question, because that was the response required by his cultural setting and by his vow to be the servant of this God.</p>
<p>However, from our modern Canadian perspective, the scenario is strange and perverse.  If this happened to us, we would question it.  We would look for a second opinion.  We would doubt our sanity.  We would do all we could to get out of this dilemma, because <em>it doesn&#8217;t make sense</em>.  This is not the God we know. The story makes no sense to us in our culture because <em>we understand God in Jesus Christ</em> &#8211; a God who loves and redeems, not one who destroys.  My friend looks at this story and sees a god of terror, a vindictive and a cruel god.  And I know why, because I live in the same culture and see things the same way.</p>
<p>But for Abraham, this scenario fit perfectly in his world.  This was how gods acted. This story made perfect sense to Abraham because it was played out over and over again in human sacrifice all around him.  This, for Abraham, was <em>normal</em>. God was speaking Abraham&#8217;s language.</p>
<p>What Abraham didn&#8217;t know, and needed to learn, was the <em>character</em> of the God who had chosen him.</p>
<h3>The Message is in the Medium</h3>
<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">I am <em>not</em> that kind of god</p>
<p>At the point of sacrificing his son God commanded Abraham to stop, he provided a ram and Isaac was saved.  In essence, God said, &#8220;I am <em>not</em> that kind of god.  I am not like the common gods that you see around you that hurt and destroy and damage. I am <em>not</em> a god who destroys life, but one who gives life.  I am the redeemer.  I am the provider.&#8221;</p>
<p>This passage is one of the major turning points in understanding God in the whole history of humanity.  It is a watershed lesson about the character of God.  This is the beginning of the comprehension that God is a God of love, provision and redemption.  That understanding begins here and grows throughout the Bible, culminating in the cross of Christ.  Isaac&#8217;s sacrifice is the prelude to the cross, in which God says to humanity, &#8220;Not only do I <em>not</em> bring death and destruction, but I <em>suffer</em> death and destruction so that you may have life.&#8221; In that greatest of all accommodations to our weakness &#8211; the cross &#8211; lies our salvation. God becomes a frail human being dying on a cross, bringing life to all, showing us that the greatest God is the one who has the greatest love.</p>
<p>When this passage is looked at through our modern cultural lenses, it is easy to fear that God may be a god of terrors and an arbitrary despot.  But this is not the intended lesson.  Rather, it was understood by Moses, the Israelites and all the worshippers of God throughout scripture, as a foundational lesson revealing the sacredness of human life and God&#8217;s redemptive nature. Abraham had a lesson to learn and through him, <em>humanity</em> had a lesson to learn about the true character of the God who provides.</p>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: blue;">God is light; in him there is no darkness at all</p>
<p>Would I kill my child if God told me to?  Absolutely not.  Because that is not the God I worship. We know and believe that God will never do nor command that which is evil because of Jesus Christ.  &#8220;This is the message we have heard from him and declare to you: God is light; in him there is no darkness at all&#8221; (1 John 1:5 TNIV).</p>
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<li><a id="ftn1" href="#ref1">1</a> posted by Terry at http://able2know.org/topic/22070-1.  Accessed Sept 28, 2008.</li>
<li><a id="ftn2" href="#ref2">2</a> Smalley, William A. 1991. <em>Translation As Mission: Bible Translation in the Modern Missionary Movement</em>. Macon, Georgia:Mercer University Press. 224-233.</li>
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		<title>65. Which Bible Version is Superior? 2. Weaknesses of translation styles</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mark Naylor</dc:creator>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>Both literal or &#8220;word for word&#8221; translations as well as meaning-based or &#8220;thought for thought&#8221; translations are legitimate representations of the original biblical manuscripts. Each style of translation has strengths and weaknesses in providing readers access to the content of the biblical writings in their own language. The argument in these articles is that a common claim that literal translations are superior to meaning-based translations is incorrect and can be harmful to the body of Christ. Because literal translations often obscure the meaning for the average reader, insistence on using those versions exclusively or primarily serves to keep people from engaging God&#8217;s word with the clarity offered by meaning-based versions.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>Both translation orientations are found in all Bible versions and so, strictly speaking, it is misleading to label a version &#8220;literal&#8221; or &#8220;meaning-based.&#8221; Literal versions also consider what the translation will mean in the receptor language, and meaning-based versions often provide translation through which the reader may recognize words and structures of the original languages. </em></span><span style="color: #008000;"><em>(see the <a href="http://www.ibs.org/bibles/translations/">IBS English Bible Translation Comparison chart </a>in which versions are charted according to their &#8220;degree of literalness.&#8221;) </em></span><span style="color: #008000;"><em>The following articles seek to show that the &#8220;degree of literalness&#8221; is unrelated to the accuracy of translation and should not be used to judge one version as more the word of God than another. Accuracy must be gauged according to the success of any translation to communicate the </em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">message</span><em> of the original manuscripts to its intended audience.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>In these articles &#8220;version&#8221; (n) refers to a complete translated text like the NRSV (literal version) or CEV (meaning-based version), while &#8220;translation&#8221; (n) refers to the text within the version. For example, any </em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">version</span><em>, whether labeled &#8220;literal&#8221; or &#8220;meaning-based&#8221; will have both styles of </em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">translation</span><em>.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em> The author of the articles has been involved in Bible translation as supervisor of the Sindhi translation project for the Pakistan Bible Society during the past 18 years.</em></span></p>
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<h2>2. Weaknesses of translation styles</h2>
<h3>&#8220;In your own words&#8221;</h3>
<p><a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/pills2opti.jpg" rel="lightbox[130]"><img class="size-medium wp-image-141 alignright" title="pills2opti" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/pills2opti-225x300.jpg" alt="" width="126" height="168" /></a>During our time in Pakistan, my wife, Karen, went with a friend to see a doctor.  With little explanation, the doctor diagnosed the friend and prescribed some pills.  My wife pursued the issue further and asked the doctor the reason for the diagnosis.  Speaking in English, he began to explain the illness. Something about his style of speech struck Karen as strange, until she realized what it was: the doctor was reciting verbatim from an English medical textbook!  Rather than provide an explanation in his own words, he repeated a passage that had been memorized in medical school.</p>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: maroon;">&#8220;in your own words&#8221;</p>
<p>In contrast, I remember many times as I was growing up in Canadian schools that the teacher would tell us to explain something &#8220;in your own words.&#8221; The teacher&#8217;s goal was to ensure <em>comprehension</em> on the part of the students. Rote repetition probably meant that the student did not understand but was hiding their ignorance behind the words of those who did.  This western education method is less valued in Pakistan where rote repetition is the norm, underlining the priority given to the wisdom and tradition of the elders and scholars.</p>
<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: maroon;">Both literal and meaning-based translations &#8230; have limitations&#8221;</p>
<p>Both of these orientations are reflected in my work as I check the meaning of the Sindhi Bible translation.   Although I am familiar to some extent with the original languages of the Bible, Greek and Hebrew, I am far from fluent and rely heavily on the scholarship of others through commentaries and translation helps.  One of my &#8220;short-cuts&#8221; is to use a literal translation, such as the NRSV, to provide an indication of the structure and words of the original manuscript. In contrast, when I am puzzled about the <em>meaning</em> of a verse, I do not consult literal translations because they do not clarify the sense, but only reproduce that structure and those words that have hidden the meaning from me.  Instead, I turn to meaning-based translations.  Because they have put the meaning &#8220;in their own words,&#8221; according to the English vernacular I am familiar with, I can often quickly discover what the verse means.  Both literal and meaning-based translations are useful, but they both have limitations.  The key weaknesses of both orientations are outlined below.</p>
<h3>Weaknesses of Literal translations</h3>
<h4>a. Lack of clarity can mislead and discourage readers</h4>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: maroon;">ESV&#8217;s success &#8230; highlights its primary weakness</p>
<p>Kermit Titrud provides the following examples of awkward or misleading renditions in the highly literal English Standard Version (ESV).  These examples do not constitute failure or inaccuracy of translation, for the version <em>intentionally</em> uses a Greek or Hebrew rather than English construction in order to provide an equivalence of the <em>form</em> of the original language (formal equivalence).  At the same time, the ESV&#8217;s success in achieving this goal highlights its primary weakness, because <em>communication</em> of God&#8217;s word to those unfamiliar with the original text is sometimes lacking.</p>
<p>Mark 1:11 reads in the ESV,  &#8220;with you I am well pleased.&#8221;  Titrud asked a number of English speakers if they would ever use this phrase in addressing their children and none of them would. It reflects Greek structure but is awkward English.  The form, which was natural in the 1st century, does not provide equivalent impact or significance in our context.</p>
<p><a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/adam-eve-snake.jpg" rel="lightbox[130]"><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-145" title="adam-eve-snake" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/adam-eve-snake-199x300.jpg" alt="" width="159" height="240" /></a>In Genesis 4:1 the ESV has &#8220;Now Adam knew Eve his wife.&#8221;  In a discussion with teenagers, Titrud discovered that their understanding of this phrase was not in terms of sexual intimacy (its primary meaning), but in terms of familiarity in relationship. One teenager &#8220;said that since Adam was married to Eve, he of course knew her. The second one said that since Eve was taken from Adam&#8217;s rib, Adam of course knew himself. The third one said that it took him a while to really get to know her and accept her &#8211; to understand her.&#8221;  This distortion occurred because the teenagers read the verse according to <em>vernacular</em> English, rather than recognizing the unique way the ESV uses English to reflect the constructs of the original language.</p>
<p>Psalm 1:1 reads: &#8220;Blessed is the man who walks not in the counsel of the wicked, nor stands in the way of sinners.&#8221;  The latter phrase, &#8220;stand in the way of sinners,&#8221; if read according to modern English idiom, is a blessing on those who do not hinder sinners from committing crimes. The intent of the text is to pronounce a blessing on those who refuse to do evil.<a id="ref1" href="#ftn1"><strong><sup>1</sup></strong></a></p>
<p>As mentioned in the <a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/archives/126">introductory article on the two translation styles</a>, the primary weakness of formal translations is that comprehending the meaning of the text requires a background education beyond the common day-to-day use of the reader&#8217;s language.  The reader is expected to determine the correct meaning of the translated text based on comprehension of the <em>original</em> text.  Unfortunately, few readers of the Bible have appropriate understanding of the background and context of the original text that allows them to adequately interpret the meaning. Even those with some training in exegesis and the original languages are at a disadvantage, because their limited perspective can lead them astray. We do not live in the same culture as the authors and original audience and so we do not approach the text with the same background information and assumptions. The saving grace is that there are commentaries and other Bible study guides prepared by scholars that provide the broader perspective and support required for a correct interpretation.</p>
<p>For example, consider Luke 1:46, 47 in which Mary says,</p>
<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: maroon;">Soul &#8230; Spirit</p>
<blockquote><p>&#8220;My soul magnifies the Lord,<br />
 And my spirit rejoices in God my savior.&#8221; (NRSV)</p>
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<p>As a literal translation, these lines in the NRSV reflect the poetic structure and words of the original language, but not in a way common to the English vernacular.  The reader with background understanding will recognize the parallel structure and the likelihood that Mary is using two separate words &#8211; soul and spirit &#8211; for one expression of praise from her center of emotion. A natural reading of the translation by one unfamiliar with the poetic style could be that she is speaking of two separate experiences and aspects of her being.<strong><strong><strong><a id="ref2" href="#ftn2"><strong>2</strong></a></strong></strong></strong> Understanding of this verse is obtained, not by reading the translated text at face value in the vernacular English, but by <em>going behind</em> the translated text and interpreting according to the way the <em>original</em> writing functions. In contrast, a meaning-based translation will provide a straightforward interpretation by using vernacular English, e.g., &#8220;&#8230;how I praise the Lord. How I rejoice in God my Savior&#8221; (NLT).</p>
<p>Those who insist that literal translations are superior probably do the greatest damage to people incapable of going behind the translated text to discover the meaning of the original manuscripts.  For this vast majority of believers, the literal translation in their hands is often not understood, or worse they may misread the text. Even in the best-case scenario, readers are dependent upon others to provide interpretation.  Because many passages are difficult to understand, the reader may quickly become discouraged or allow the comfort of familiar words to be a substitute for comprehension.  Unfortunately, literal translations can convince readers that a lack of clarity in Bible reading is the norm.</p>
<h4>b. Why Literal translations often lack clarity</h4>
<p>But is it really true that literal translations often fail to communicate the meaning?  Since every word is &#8220;breathed out&#8221; by God, should not a word for word translation that uses synonyms between languages be both necessary and sufficient to communicate the meaning?<strong><sup><a id="ref3" href="#ftn3"><strong>3</strong></a></sup></strong> Although this assumption is often used to support the theory that literal translations are superior, it is based on misunderstandings concerning the nature of language.</p>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: maroon;">&#8220;cat&#8221; + &#8220;hat&#8221; + &#8220;the&#8221; + &#8220;in&#8221; ≠ &#8220;the cat in the hat&#8221;</p>
<p>First, the meaning of a text does not reside solely in the words themselves, but in the way the words relate to each other to form ideas or thoughts.  That is, in communication, the meaning of the sentence is not determined from the sum of the meanings of individual words, but by the relationship of the words to each other.  For example, the meanings of the words &#8220;cat,&#8221; &#8220;hat,&#8221; &#8220;the,&#8221; and &#8220;in&#8221; considered individually do not mean the same as &#8220;the cat in the hat.&#8221;  Because words do not relate in the same way in different languages, a simple word for word translation often fails to communicate the meaning.</p>
<p><a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/cat-in-the-hat.jpg" rel="lightbox[130]"><img class="size-medium wp-image-142 alignright" title="cat-in-the-hat" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/cat-in-the-hat-217x300.jpg" alt="" width="174" height="240" /></a>Second, it is not true that there are equivalent synonyms between languages.  No two words in any language are entirely synonymous in meaning but have their own unique range of nuance and emotion that has been shaped by history and environment.  For example, the sentence &#8220;the cat in the hat&#8221; will evoke a far different image among those familiar with Dr. Seuss than among those who have not had the pleasure of reading his books.</p>
<p>Third, not only do words relate differently in different languages, but very often information crucial to the meaning is kept implicit because of a common understanding between author and audience.  As a result, readers of literal versions must rely heavily on material external to the text in order for communication to occur.  A literal translation of the sentence &#8220;He turned our place upside down like the cat in the hat,&#8221; into the Sindhi language would require considerable explanation before the average Sindhi reader would understand the allusion.</p>
<p>To provide a biblical illustration of the above three points, consider the description of Nimrod, &#8220;a mighty hunter before the LORD&#8221; (Gen 10:9, NRSV).  This literal translation has provided a word for word representation of the original with the words &#8220;before the LORD.&#8221;  Each word has meaning, but because the <em>relationship between the words</em> is different than in the original Hebrew, the meaning represented by this English translation is hidden; it is not obvious what it means for a person to be a mighty hunter &#8220;before the LORD.&#8221;  The sum of the words do not equate with the meaning of the original.</p>
<p>Second, the word &#8220;LORD&#8221; is capitalized to indicate a non-vernacular stylized representation of the Hebrew name for God, &#8220;YHWH&#8221; (another stylized representation!).  This is necessary because there is no equivalent for this Hebrew name of God in English.  As a result, a descriptive word (lord = master) is capitalized to communicate a meaning that is not inherent in the word &#8220;lord&#8221; itself.</p>
<p>Third, it is the implicit information in the original setting that provides the meaning of the phrase, which is lacking in the NRSV&#8217;s literal translation.  For the Hebrews, God is the ultimate point of reference and in order to express totality the biblical authors would at times refer to God.  In this verse the likely meaning is &#8220;Nimrod was the mightiest hunter in all of God&#8217;s creation&#8221; (from Sindhi translation), or &#8220;in God&#8217;s sight&#8221; (NLT).</p>
<p>Despite this weakness, &#8220;word for word&#8221; versions often do provide a translation in which the vernacular understanding of the target language naturally carries the same meaning as the original text.  Even though the intent is to point back to the original text, the receptor text in such cases also provides an equivalent meaning for the reader.  Unfortunately, there are usually no signals in the text that allow the reader to know when the meaning is being communicated according to vernacular usage, and when it is not.  This can result in frustration and confusion on the part of the reader when the wording does not adequately communicate.</p>
<h3>Weaknesses of meaning-based translations</h3>
<h4>a. Lack of correspondence to form</h4>
<p>Meaning-based versions do the work of interpretation for the reader by presenting the meaning of the original text in the vernacular language of the receptor audience.  The readers are expected to gain an understanding directly from the <em>translated</em> text according to the way words are used in their language, not as symbols pointing back to potential meaning residing in the original text.  Based on substantial scholarship and critical translation checking, the meaning of the original &#8211; the inspired message &#8211; is presented in structures natural to the reader; the meaning resides in the <em>translated</em> text.  This consistency in the <em>intent</em> of meaning-based versions is helpful to readers because they do not have to wonder if a particular passage is to be understood as written or if there is background information that needs to be brought to the text.</p>
<p>However, as is the nature of translation, this strength has a corresponding weakness.  Meaning-based translations sacrifice the representation of the form of the original in order to present the meaning in understandable ways.  For example, the range of meaning of any word in one language does not directly correspond with the range of meaning of a word in another language. Because any word in the original language has a range of nuances and meanings depending on the context, a concern for <em>communication of meaning</em> requires the use of a variety of terms in the target language that are suitable to those contexts. So while they provide a better understanding of individual sentences or clauses, meaning-based translations do not reveal to the reader the structure or intentional word choices of the original language.  The sentence provided above, &#8220;He turned our place upside down like the cat in the hat,&#8221; in a meaning-based translation would likely use a simile familiar to the audience, or ignore the reference to &#8220;the cat in the hat&#8221; as secondary to the meaning.</p>
<p>It is usually not possible to follow the theological development of a specific Greek term in Paul&#8217;s writings because a meaning-based translation will used a variety words depending on the context to provide clarity for the reader.  For instance, Paul uses a pair of terms, <em>pneuma</em> and <em>sarx</em> (&#8220;spirit&#8221; and &#8220;flesh&#8221; &#8211; NRSV), a number of times in his letters.  A literal translation will attempt to use the same English words in each case to assist the reader in recognizing the connection between the passages. In contrast, the NIV &#8220;construes <em>sarx</em> as ‘sinful nature&#8217; in Rom 8, and <em>sarkinos</em> as ‘worldly&#8217; in 1 Cor 3, with the result that the reader of this translation is not aware that in the original the same root form was employed&#8230;. [This translation choice] makes it more difficult to compare individual passages with parallel passages elsewhere.&#8221;<strong><sup><a id="ref4" href="#ftn4"><strong>4</strong></a></sup></strong></p>
<h4>b. Potential for Mistranslation</h4>
<p>There are two other weaknesses to meaning-based translations that are more disconcerting.  First, while meaning-based versions are more intentional than literal versions to present the meaning clearly according to receptor language usage, this increases the potential for <em>mistranslation</em>. &#8220;Since the translator is ‘freer&#8217; from the grammatical forms of the original language he [<em>sic</em>] is more likely to exceed the bounds of an accurate translation, in an effort to speak naturally in the native language. That is, the [meaning-based] translations are capable of being more natural and more precise than are [literal] translations, but they are also more capable of being precisely wrong.&#8221;<strong><a id="ref5" href="#ftn5"><strong>5</strong></a></strong> The primary complaint of those who disparage meaning-based versions is that they disagree with the meaning presented in certain passages.  In such cases formal translations are usually obscure or encompass a number of possible interpretations.</p>
<p>In 1 Tim 6:17 the ESV translates &#8220;God&#8230; richly provides us with everything to enjoy.&#8221; By not clarifying the word &#8220;everything,&#8221; a potential <em>mis</em>interpretation is that we are to enjoy everything, even those things that bring discomfort or hurt.  In order to mitigate this the CEV translates, &#8220;God&#8230; is rich and blesses us with everything <em>we need</em> to enjoy life.&#8221; While a correct aspect of the meaning, this limits God&#8217;s bounty to our <em>needs</em>, as Grudem points out, &#8220;[We] can freely enjoy the abundant diversity of God&#8217;s excellent creation,&#8221;<strong><a id="ref6" href="#ftn6"><strong>6</strong></a></strong> which encompasses far more than what we need.  While it would be going too far to call the CEV rendering a &#8220;mistranslation,&#8221; it nonetheless appears to have limited the meaning more severely than warranted in its attempt to avoid the lack of clarity evident in the (literal) ESV.</p>
<p>By translating Mt. 5:3 as &#8220;those people who depend only on [God],&#8221; the CEV may have mistranslated the phrase if this is not what it means (footnote: I think the TEV&#8217;s &#8220;who know they are spiritually poor&#8221; captures the essence better, but with a lesser degree of clarity).  In contrast, the NRSV (a literal oriented version) with &#8220;poor in spirit&#8221; provides English synonyms and equivalent structures without clarifying the meaning. The NRSV cannot be accused of <em>mistranslating</em>, although to achieve this it chooses to <em>under translate</em> and therefore, for most people, <em>fails to communicate</em> because of the vast number of potential meanings.  If the CEV is correct, then it not only provides the reader with the inspired message, but it also prevents the reader from coming to a <em>wrong</em> understanding, a very real possibility with the NRSV.  At the same time, because clarity requires a narrowing of possible meanings, the danger of mistranslation remains a distinct possibility for meaning-based translations.</p>
<h4>c. Inability to include all the possible nuances</h4>
<p>The other major weakness of meaning-based translations, closely related to the previous, is that the full nuance of the original text is seldom, if ever, maintained.  Whenever communication in translation occurs, it occurs within a new context and therefore the fullness and impact of the original context cannot be maintained.  Meaning-based translations use the vernacular of the receptor audience; the meaning is determined by the context and conventions of the <em>target</em> people group. Elements of the original context that provided meaning for the original readers are unavoidably neglected.</p>
<p>In reference to the above mentioned verse, Gen 10:9, the sentence, &#8220;[Nimrod] was a mighty hunter before the LORD&#8221; (NRSV) by <em>virtue of its obscurity</em>, can be understood as including all the intended nuance of the original text.  To provide clarity of meaning, meaning-based translations narrow the nuance to one possible image. For example, one meaning-based version has &#8220;Nimrod was the mightiest hunter in the whole world&#8221; (one edition of the NLT).  While providing the probable meaning, it neglects the context of the Hebrew worldview with its reference to God.  The translation &#8220;Nimrod was a mighty hunter in God&#8217;s sight&#8221; (NLT) maintains a sense of the Hebrew worldview but loses the superlative force &#8211; Nimrod as the <em>mightiest</em> hunter. Furthermore, these translations exclude other possible interpretations, such as the TEV, &#8220;whose strength came from the LORD.&#8221;</p>
<p>By virtue of providing a phrase that cannot be understood without bringing outside information to the text, the original nuance is not <em>excluded</em> <em>from</em> the translated text in literal translations, but it is not necessarily <em>communicated by</em> the text.  Meaning-based translations, of necessity, exclude some of the nuance in order to bring clarity to the text.  The translator has the choice between communicating the meaning while losing some of the surrounding nuance (meaning-based), or maintaining the full <em>potential</em> of possible meanings but without communicating a clear sense of the meaning (formal).</p>
<h3>Together, greater confidence and comprehension</h3>
<p>Though individually limited, together literal and meaning-based translations provide readers with greater confidence that they have grasped the intended meaning of the original text. Exclusive use of a literal version makes it difficult for the reader to understand the message.  Exclusive use of one meaning-based translation will prevent the reader from exposure to other possible nuances of the original text.  Excellent scholarship lies behind both literal and meaning-based versions so that we can read them with confidence and compare them in order to obtain a deeper appreciation of the message. Literal translations ensure that we maintain a tie to the original text as the standard for the meaning, while meaning-based translations provide clarity and comprehension.</p>
<p>A future article will explore the theological concerns and assumptions that lie behind the claim of some that literal translations are superior to meaning-based translations.</p>
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<li><a id="ftn1" href="#ref1">1</a> These examples are taken from Kermit Titrud&#8217;s article at www.geocities.com/bible_translation/list/files/titrud.doc accessed August 08.</li>
<li><a id="ftn2" href="#ref2">2</a> In his article, &#8220;Are Only Some Words of Scripture Breathed Out By God&#8221; in <em>Translating Truth: The Case for Essentially Literal Bible Translation</em> (Wheaton, Il.: Crossway Books, 2005, 19-56) Wayne Grudem proposes a distinction of meaning between the two lines (p. 39), but does not provide any guidance towards determining that distinction.</li>
<li><a id="ftn3" href="#ref3">3</a> Wayne Grudem states, &#8220;the Bible repeatedly claims that every one of its words (in the original languages) is a word spoken to us by God, and is therefore of utmost importance, and &#8230; this fact provides strong argument in favour of &#8220;essentially literal&#8221; (or &#8220;word-for-word&#8221;) translations&#8230;.&#8221; Ibid. p. 19.</li>
<li><a id="ftn4" href="#ref4">4</a> T. David Gordon, &#8220;Translation Theory&#8221; 1985, at http://www.bible-researcher.com/gordon.html accessed July 4, 2008</li>
<li><a id="ftn5" href="#ref5">5</a> ibid.</li>
<li><a id="ftn6" href="#ref6">6</a> Grudem. p. 45.</li>
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		<title>64. Which Bible Version is Superior? 1. Two Styles</title>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>Both literal or &#8220;word for word&#8221; translations as well as meaning-based or &#8220;thought for thought&#8221; translations are legitimate representations of the original biblical manuscripts. Each style of translation has strengths and weaknesses in providing readers access to the content of the biblical writings in their own language.   The argument in these articles is that a common claim that literal translations are superior to meaning-based translations is incorrect and can be harmful to the body of Christ. Because literal translations often obscure the meaning for the average reader, insistence on using those versions exclusively or primarily serves to keep people from engaging God&#8217;s word with the clarity offered by meaning-based versions.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>Both translation orientations are found in all Bible versions and so, strictly speaking, it is misleading to label a version &#8220;literal&#8221; or &#8220;meaning-based.&#8221; Literal versions also consider what the translation will mean in the receptor language, and meaning-based versions often provide translation through which the reader may recognize words and structures of the original languages. </em></span><span style="color: #008000;"><em>(see the <a href="http://www.ibs.org/bibles/translations/">IBS English Bible Translation Comparison chart </a>in which versions are charted according to their &#8220;degree of literalness.&#8221;) </em></span><span style="color: #008000;"><em>The following articles seek to show that the &#8220;degree of literalness&#8221; is unrelated to the accuracy of translation and should not be used to judge one version as more the word of God than another. Accuracy must be gauged according to the success of any translation to communicate the </em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">message</span><em> of the original manuscripts to its intended audience.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em>In these articles &#8220;version&#8221; (n) refers to a complete translated text like the NRSV (literal version) or CEV (meaning-based version), while &#8220;translation&#8221; (n) refers to the text within the version.  For example, any </em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">version</span><em>, whether labeled &#8220;literal&#8221; or &#8220;meaning-based&#8221; will have both styles of </em><span style="text-decoration: underline;">translation</span><em>.</em></span></p>
<p><span style="color: #008000;"><em> The author of the articles has been involved in Bible translation as supervisor of the Sindhi translation project for the Pakistan Bible Society during the past 18 years.</em></span></p>
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<h2>1. Two styles</h2>
<h3>Are literal translations more accurate?</h3>
<p><a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/writing_20bible_20scroll_201.jpg" rel="lightbox[126]"><img class="alignright size-medium wp-image-127" style="float: right;" title="writing_20bible_20scroll_201" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/writing_20bible_20scroll_201-300x207.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="207" /></a>When Today&#8217;s New International Version (TNIV) was first published, I walked into our local Christian bookstore and asked the sales person, &#8220;Do you have the new TNIV?&#8221;  A wary look came into his eyes and he said, &#8220;Why do you ask?&#8221;  Puzzled, I replied, &#8220;Because I would like to purchase a copy.&#8221;  Relieved he showed me where the books were being kept. He also explained the source of his angst: some people were coming into the store and rebuking them for carrying such a &#8220;heretical&#8221; translation.</p>
<p>Recently I heard a sermon in which the speaker criticized certain &#8220;meaning-based&#8221; Bible versions and promoted &#8220;literal&#8221; translations as &#8220;more the word of God.&#8221;  He encouraged people to consider the common language versions, which were easier to understand, as less worthy to be considered God&#8217;s word than the more &#8220;word for word&#8221; translations.</p>
<p>If some translations are heretical, then we should avoid them.  If meaning-based translations are truly less God&#8217;s word than literal translations, then we would do well to read versions that are more accurate.  But are such claims true, or do they arise from a misunderstanding of the nature of language and the translation process?</p>
<h3>Translations are like theologies: Human attempts to express the Divine Word</h3>
<p><a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/image/795px-Brueghel-tower-of-babel.jpg" rel="lightbox[126]"><img class="alignleft size-medium wp-image-110" title="795px-Brueghel-tower-of-babel" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/image/795px-Brueghel-tower-of-babel-300x226.jpg" alt="" width="300" height="226" /></a>Since Babel there have always been both &#8220;word for word&#8221; and &#8220;thought for thought&#8221; translations between languages.  &#8220;Dynamic equivalence,&#8221; &#8220;thought for thought&#8221; or &#8220;meaning-based&#8221; are new terminology to describe a translation style which has always existed. &#8220;Literal,&#8221; &#8220;Word for word&#8221; or &#8220;formal&#8221; describes a separate translation style which also has always existed.  For example, the ancient Greek version of the Old Testament, the Septuagint (LXX), which was often quoted by New Testament writers, has instances of both literal and meaning-based translations.  As one example among many, the Hebrew word <em>rosh</em> has a nuance of a literal, physical &#8220;head&#8221; as well as a more metaphorical usage of &#8220;chief authority.&#8221;  The LXX sometimes uses the Greek word for &#8220;head,&#8221; <em>kephale</em>, to translate <em>rosh</em>, and sometimes uses other words to describe the concept of &#8220;chief authority&#8221; in non-metaphorical terms.<a id="ref1" href="#ftn1"><strong><sup>1</sup></strong></a></p>
<p>Outside of Bible translation, in the modern secular world of written translation, the meaning-based style tends to be the <em>norm</em> for translation, rather than &#8220;word for word.&#8221; The assumption is that rather than the <em>structures and words</em> of the original language, it is the <em>meaning</em> that is of interest to the reader.  The role of the translator is to express the meaning of the original manuscript so that the receptor audience can engage the <em>meaning</em> according to the accepted usage of the <em>receptor</em> language. The goal is the communication of the message. However, Bible translation deals with manuscripts which are considered by those of us who are evangelicals as verbally inspired by God.  The sacredness of the original writings is reflected in the desire of the translators of literal translations to reflect, as close as possible, the linguistic structures and individual words of the original.</p>
<p>Is the ordinary method of meaning-based translation suitable for the biblical texts, or does their nature as &#8220;God-breathed&#8221; require a different, more literal, style? In our human attempts to express the divine word, how should we proceed?</p>
<h3>Literal versus meaning-based orientations in translation</h3>
<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: maroon;">Literal translations are oriented towards the original language</p>
<p>Literal or formal translations are oriented towards the original language.  That is, for the translator, the meaning <em>remains in the original text</em>.  The translator uses the words of the receptor language as symbols or synonyms that point to the words in the original text.  While the nuance and levels of meaning will overlap to some extent, the synonym employed in the translation is <em>intended to mean what the word in the original text means rather than the way it is used in the reader&#8217;s vernacular</em>.  Thus, when the reader reads, for example, the phrase &#8220;poor in spirit&#8221; (Mt 5:3 NRSV), they are not to relate this phrase to current English vernacular usage, as if the words have communicated the meaning <em>as they stand </em>(A reader unfamiliar with the literal language may attempt to interpret this according to the vernacular &#8220;low in spirits&#8221; or &#8220;depressed&#8221;). Rather, the intent is for the reader to recognize the English phrase as symbolizing the phrase, &#8220;<em>oi ptoxoi to pneumati</em>,&#8221; found in the Greek New Testament manuscript. It is the meaning of this <em>Greek</em> phrase that readers must be aware of in order to understand.  The English words function as symbols which knowledgeable readers use to recognize the Greek phrase, and according to their ability to <em>complete the translation</em>, they are able to access the meaning.  Alternatively, and more commonly, people may read the phrase according to the meaning taught them by those teachers capable of completing the translation.</p>
<p>It is this perspective that causes preachers to speak in terms of &#8220;this word (referring to an English word) in the original language actually means&#8230;,&#8221; even though the English vernacular meaning is clear to the hearers. In his promotion of the English Standard Version (a literal translation), Dr Packer states that the ESV attempts to provide the reader not just what was meant, but &#8220;what was said.&#8221;<strong><strong><a id="ref2" href="#ftn2"><strong>2</strong></a></strong></strong> That is, the reader is to view the English words as representative of the original Hebrew and Greek words, which may or may not reflect common English usage.  With literal translations, readers must be cautious in reading a word in a vernacular sense, because without some background understanding of the original meaning (or support from Bible teachers), they cannot be certain if their vernacular understanding truly reflects the meaning of the original text.</p>
<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: maroon;">meaning-based translations are oriented towards the receptor language</p>
<p>In contrast, meaning-based translations are oriented towards the <em>receptor</em> language.  That is, for the translator, the meaning of the original becomes <em>expressed in</em> the receptor language.  Rather than using words as symbols pointing to words in the original, the words are intended to <em>convey meaning according to the current vernacular usage</em>.  Thus when the reader reads, for example, the phrase &#8220;those people who depend only on him&#8221; (Mt 5:3 CEV translation corresponding to NRSV above), the reader is intended to read those words as expressing the meaning of the original <em>according to the accepted and understood usage of the receptor language</em>.  With a meaning-based translation, the reader encounters the meaning directly from the translated text.  With a formal translation the reader is expected to <em>go behind</em> the translated text and extract the meaning based on their exposure to the meaning of the original language and its meaning.</p>
<p>In meaning-based translations (thought for thought) the reader is not required to understand or have a working knowledge of the original language.  Moreover, a theology of translation that affirms the &#8220;translatability&#8221; of the word of God assumes that the reader is able to fully access the word of God without needing knowledge of the original manuscripts, as long as the translation communicates the same meaning as the original.<strong><sup><a id="ref3" href="#ftn3"><strong>3</strong></a></sup></strong> In &#8220;thought for thought&#8221; translations readers are expected to read the translation as if the words and phrases mean what they normally mean in everyday usage within their language.  The meaning of the original manuscripts, with one set of words, constructs and grammatical rules, has been communicated using a different set of words, constructs and grammatical rules.</p>
<h3>Meaning-based as &#8220;receptor language friendly&#8221;</h3>
<p>A key difference between the formal and meaning-based translations is that the former uses the receptor language in a way that <em>lacks compatibility with normal usage</em> in order to provide readers with a sense of what the original language and structure was like (looking back at the source language).  The latter uses the receptor language <em>according to the common usage</em> (receptor language friendly) so that readers can understand the meaning of the original manuscript in their own language.  Thus, for example, the Sindhi translation that I am involved in does not have a formal translation for Mt 5:3 that would be equivalent to &#8220;poor in spirit.&#8221;  In normal Sindhi usage that would communicate (erroneously) that the person was lacking in compassion and love.  For a <em>literal</em> translation this would not be an incorrect rendering as long as the reader was taught to understand it as referring to the meaning intended by the original text. Of course, this would mean that the majority of readers would either misunderstand or not understand the meaning since they are not familiar with Greek, nor do they have access to a teacher who could explain the meaning.  Recognizing the needs of the audience to understand the words according to the common vernacular, the phrase was translated as &#8220;humble of heart.&#8221;</p>
<p>For more examples and further explanation of this concept, please see the CCI article <a href="http://impact.nbseminary.com/archives/54">#41 &#8220;Clarifying Bible Translation.&#8221;</a> The following article will examine the weaknesses of both translation orientations.</p>
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<li><a id="ftn1" href="#ref1">1</a> Peter Cotterell &amp; Max Turner state that &#8220;<em>kephalē</em> and <em>archē</em> are used interchangeably to translate the Hebrew <em>rosh</em> when the latter has the sense ‘chief&#8217; or ‘head over.&#8217;&#8221; <em>Linguists and Biblical Interpretation</em>. Downers Grove: IVP. 1989. p. 142.</li>
<li><a id="ftn2" href="#ref2">2</a> Interview with Dr. J.I. Packer in <em>BC Christian News</em>, August 2007, Vol 27 #8  http://www.canadianchristianity.com/bc/bccn/0807/01bible.</li>
<li><a id="ftn3" href="#ref3">3</a> In <em>Translating the Message</em> (Maryknoll: Orbis. 1989), Lamin Sanneh argues convincingly for &#8220;translatability&#8221; of the message as necessary to destroy &#8220;any claims for cultural absolutism.&#8221; p. 24.</li>
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		<title>59. The Problem with Heaven</title>
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		<description><![CDATA[Translation seeks Communication When our main translator walked into the translation office last December in Shikarpur, Pakistan, I greeted him with, &#8220;I have a problem with heaven.&#8221;&#160; He laughed and responded, &#8220;Well, if you have trouble with heaven, what&#8217;s left? There is not much more to hope for!&#8221;&#160; I explained that it was not the [...]]]></description>
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<p><img width="300" height="200" align="right" alt="" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/image/heaven.jpg" />When our main translator walked into the translation office last December in Shikarpur, Pakistan, I greeted him with, &ldquo;I have a problem with heaven.&rdquo;&nbsp; He laughed and responded, &ldquo;Well, if you have trouble with heaven, what&rsquo;s left? There is not much more to hope for!&rdquo;&nbsp; I explained that it was not the concept of heaven that bothered me, but the terms used in our Sindhi Bible translation.</p>
<p>Bible translators are not so much concerned with formal definitions of words as they are with how the translation is understood by the receptor audience.&nbsp; For example, even though the English word &ldquo;heaven&rdquo; can legitimately describe the physical expanse over our heads, modern translations will use more common expressions such as &ldquo;sky,&rdquo; thus avoiding a possible confusion with God&rsquo;s abode, or the popular perception of &ldquo;the place we go when we die,&rdquo; i.e., Paradise. The target audience&rsquo;s understanding of the translation is a key guide for the translator to ensure appropriate communication of the original message.&nbsp; A recent correction to the Sindhi translation of the New Testament provides an illustration.</p>
<p class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: maroon;">The target audience&rsquo;s understanding of the translation is a key guide for the translator</p>
<p>During my recent translation trip to Pakistan in Nov-Dec, 2007 we worked on the Hindu Sindhi NT translation project, which is based on the already prepared and published manuscript of the Muslim Sindhi NT.&nbsp; As we compared the translated texts and rechecked the meaning of the original biblical manuscripts, it became obvious that some revisions to the previously prepared Muslim Sindhi translation were also required.</p>
<h3>Rewards after we die?</h3>
<p>In Mt 5:12 and Lu 6:23 Jesus encourages those who are persecuted to &ldquo;rejoice and be glad, because great is your reward in heaven&rdquo; (TNIV).&nbsp; The word used in the original translation of the Sindhi New Testament was &ldquo;bisht,&rdquo; a word that parallels the western religious concept of Paradise. From the Muslim Sindhi reader&rsquo;s point of view this would be understood as the conservative Islamic doctrine of Paradise, the place of eternal reward for the faithful received after the resurrection to life.&nbsp; Moreover, its use in this passage would confirm the common notion among Sindhi Muslims that we can earn rewards here on earth which will be translated into pleasures to be enjoyed in the life to come; our good deeds are tabulated and rewarded in the next life.&nbsp;</p>
<p class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox" style="color: maroon;">Sufis commonly believe that the only reward worth seeking is God himself</p>
<p>However, it is unlikely that Jesus intended this meaning.&nbsp; &ldquo;Heaven,&rdquo; particularly in the book Matthew, is a reference to God&rsquo;s dwelling place used for the purpose of speaking indirectly about God. The phrase &ldquo;the kingdom of heaven,&rdquo; for example, is equivalent to &ldquo;the kingdom of God&rdquo; found in Luke.&nbsp; Both phrases refer to God&rsquo;s rule over creation. To communicate this sense of &ldquo;heaven&rdquo; in Sindhi a different word than &ldquo;bisht&rdquo; is required.&nbsp; The phrase, &ldquo;Our Father in heaven&rdquo; (TNIV) in Mt 6:9, was helpful in identifying a better term.&nbsp; Because &ldquo;heaven&rdquo; in this verse cannot be confused with Paradise, the Muslim Sindhi translation has the word &ldquo;Asman,&rdquo; referring to the place where God resides.&nbsp; Understanding this meaning of &ldquo;heaven&rdquo; to be the same in Mt 5:12 and Lu 6:23, the Muslim Sindhi translation has been changed to &ldquo;Asman&rdquo; &#8211; the residence of God &#8211; from the word meaning Paradise &#8211; the place of eternal reward for the faithful.&nbsp; Unfortunately in Hindu Sindhi there is no equivalent term for &ldquo;the place where God dwells,&rdquo; and so the translation is more explicit and reads, &ldquo;rejoice and be glad, because great is your reward from God.&rdquo; <a id="ref1" href="#ftn1"><strong><sup>1</sup></strong></a></p>
<h3>From Orthodox Islam to Mystic Sufism</h3>
<p>This change of a single word represents a significant theological shift for the Sindhi reader: away from the concept of earning rewards that will be received after death, to a desire to please God and make him the appropriate focus of our concern when enduring suffering on earth.&nbsp; As a result the new translation will resonate with many Sindhi people as affirming the teaching of the mystic Sufis, who are greatly revered in the Sindh.&nbsp; Sufis commonly believe that the only reward worth seeking is God himself.&nbsp; A popular Sufi saying is, &ldquo;If God is in heaven (bisht), then I want to go to heaven.&nbsp; If God is in hell then I want to go to hell.&rdquo;</p>
<p>The following Sufi story also illustrates this understanding:</p>
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<p>A religious leader was preaching to his students in the presence of a Dervish:&nbsp; &quot;If you do bad things you will go to hell.&nbsp; If you do good things you will go to Heaven (bisht).&nbsp; So do good and not evil so that you will go to Heaven and not hell.&quot; &nbsp;<br />
The Dervish on hearing this arose and went into his house.&nbsp; There he wrapped one end of a stick with cloth, set it alight and began to walk through the town. &nbsp;<br />
&quot;What are you doing?&quot; people asked. &nbsp;<br />
&quot;I&#8217;m looking for Heaven and hell&quot;, he replied, &quot;And when I find them I will burn them both to the ground.&quot;<br />
&quot;That is absurd,&quot; they cried. &quot;Why would you want to do that?&quot;<br />
&quot;Because I have just heard religious instruction that teaches people to do good out of fear and selfishness and not for the sake of knowing God.&nbsp; It would be better if those causes of greed and terror were removed so that people would only seek God for Himself and not for their own gain!&quot; <a id="ref2" href="#ftn2"><strong><sup>2</sup></strong></a></p>
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<h3>Bridges for the Truth of God&rsquo;s Word</h3>
<p>But is there not a third possibility?&nbsp; Must the Sindhi translation of &ldquo;heaven&rdquo; recall a conservative Islamic theology on the one hand or mystic Sufi teaching on the other?&nbsp; Is there no &ldquo;neutral,&rdquo; non religious terminology that can be used to convey the biblical concept of heaven?&nbsp; The answer is &ldquo;No.&rdquo;&nbsp; By definition, the act of translation uses terminology and concepts already in use by the receptor audience, otherwise communication will not occur.&nbsp; It is essential in Bible translation to ensure that the terminology used provides an equivalent meaning that is faithful to the original text.&nbsp; The similarity between the meaning of the concept in the original manuscripts and the Sindhi understanding makes communication possible, while the differences can hopefully be overcome by reflecting on the meaning of the word within the greater context of scripture.</p>
<p><img width="300" height="204" align="right" alt="" src="http://impact.nbseminary.com/wp-content/uploads/image/ScreenSavers 004.jpg" />Moreover, when pre-existing teaching within the Sindhi community parallels biblical teaching, it is a cause for rejoicing. Not only is the task of translation made easier, but such teaching acts a bridge for the truth of God&rsquo;s word.&nbsp; When Sufi teaching is assumed true by the Sindhi reader and similar teaching is encountered in the New Testament, the result is an affirmation of the truth of God&rsquo;s word and encouragement to trust the NT.</p>
<p>(The photo is of our Hindu Sindhi workshop participants, March 2006)</p>
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<li><a id="ftn1" href="#ref1">1</a> This latter translation is still under revision.</li>
<li><a id="ftn2" href="#ref2">2</a> Both the Sufi saying and the story are from a private collection gathered from Sindhi friends during our time in Pakistan.</li>
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		<title>58. User Friendly Bibles: When Titles Mislead</title>
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<input width="100" height="124" align="left" type="image" src="http://www.spiritcommunity.com/bible_heaven.jpg" />I like section headings in Bible translation.&nbsp; They are not part of the original text, but added by the translation team to assist the reader in three ways: &ldquo;1. to help those already familiar with the Bible to find a passage they know; 2. to help those unfamiliar with the Bible to assimilate the text; 3. to help every reader by breaking up what could otherwise be forbiddingly large slabs of print.&rdquo; (1) But there are times when the insertion of section headings into a passage of scripture can be misleading.&nbsp; Even when the title itself may be accurate in its identification of the passage, the focus of the message may be distorted. (2) Furthermore the placement of some titles can actually undermine the structural unity and continuity of thought because the presence of the section heading communicates to the reader that the passage before the break is, in some way, disconnected from the passage under the heading and therefore is a &ldquo;stand alone&rdquo; passage with a unique message.</p>
<p style="color: maroon;" class="LeftOpaqueQuoteBox">the section headings actually disguised, rather than illuminated the overall meaning of the passage</p>
<p>During my trip to Pakistan for Bible translation at the end of 2007, I was involved with a small team of translators and helpers who were reviewing a translation of the New Testament in the Sindhi language.&nbsp; In our study of the Sermon on the Mount we found a number of places where section headings actually detracted from the flow of the passage and obscured the meaning.&nbsp; This was not because the headings were incorrect, but because their presence between two related passages of Scripture inadvertently indicated that the passages were unrelated to each other.&nbsp; In reality, the unity of thought between the passages was crucial and the section headings actually disguised, rather than illuminated the overall meaning of the passage.</p>
<h4>Problem Section Headings: Charity, Prayer And Fasting</h4>
<p>In the Sindhi New Testament Matthew 6:1-18 is divided into three sections each with their own heading.&nbsp; Verses 1-4 is entitled &ldquo;Teaching about Charity,&rdquo; verses 5-15 has the heading &ldquo;Teaching about Prayer,&rdquo; and verses 16-18 has the title &ldquo;Teaching about Fasting.&rdquo;&nbsp; Thus the reader is predisposed to expect three distinct messages about charity, prayer and fasting respectively.&nbsp; In actual fact, the three passages are illustrative of one message concerning hypocrisy.&nbsp; It would not be extreme to suggest that Jesus despised hypocrisy in religion.&nbsp; Putting on a show to impress others is a constant temptation (I want people to like my sermons!) whereas Jesus instructs us to &ldquo;play to an audience of One.&rdquo;&nbsp; One solution to the section headings problem is to provide one title for the entire passage &ndash; &ldquo;Avoid religious hypocrisy&rdquo; &ndash; or to express the main theme consistently in all three titles: &ldquo;Hypocrisy in Charity,&rdquo; &ldquo;Hypocrisy in prayer,&rdquo; and &ldquo;Hypocrisy in fasting.&rdquo;</p>
<h4>Problem Section Headings: Light of the Body</h4>
<p>The next section, Matthew 6:19-34, is also divided into 3 sections: verses 19-21 have the title &ldquo;Heavenly Treasure,&rdquo; verses 22-23 is entitled &ldquo;Light of the Body,&rdquo; while the remainder of the passage is preceded with &ldquo;God and Wealth.&rdquo; Again, while the headings are not inaccurate, they provide an unfortunate break between the passages so that the connection between the sections is obscured.&nbsp; This is especially disturbing for the middle section, &ldquo;Light of the Body:&rdquo;</p>
<p style="color: maroon;" class="RightOpaqueQuoteBox">Section headings &#8230; make the Bible more &ldquo;user friendly.&rdquo;</p>
<p>The eyes are like a lamp for the body. If your eyes are sound, your whole body will be full of light; but if your eyes are no good, your body will be in darkness. So if the light in you is darkness, how terribly dark it will be! (TEV)</p>
<p>These verses serve as an illustration of the overall message that our desire is to be for God and his kingdom rather than the temptations of this world. They also act as a segue between the admonition to focus on the things of God (verse 19-21) and the argument that we cannot serve two masters. That is, if we maintain the true and central focus of putting God first in our lives, then all aspects of our life will be synchronized with reality, truth and goodness.&nbsp; But if we miss out on our relationship with God as the essence of human life and purpose, then nothing can be made right: &ldquo;how terribly dark it will be!&rdquo; &nbsp;</p>
<p>Unfortunately, with the insertion of the section heading, &ldquo;Light of the Body,&rdquo; followed with a break after verse 23, the reader is inclined to search for a meaning outside of the context of the surrounding passages.&nbsp; Since the meaning is determined by the other passages, the reader can become confused by this illustration rather than recognizing it as a method to drive the point home.&nbsp; Because verses 22-23 are illustrative of the surrounding passages rather than providing a separate or distinct message, it is better for the translator to avoid a separate heading at this point.&nbsp; A heading can be inserted after verse 23 if the theme of the former passage is maintained.&nbsp; For example at verse 19 the heading could read, &ldquo;Seek God&rsquo;s Treasure,&rdquo; while the title at verse 24 could be, &ldquo;Seek God&rsquo;s Kingdom.&rdquo;</p>
<p>Section headings are a popular and important tool that make the Bible more &ldquo;user friendly.&rdquo;&nbsp; But the reader needs to be constantly aware that, like chapter and verse numbers, these are not part of the original text and can sometimes get in the way of the message!</p>
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<p>(1) Referencing W. Smalley in Clark, D. and Asberg, D. Section Headings: Purposes and Problems in The Bible Translator, Vol 57, No. 4, Oct 2006, 194-203. p. 195.</p>
<p>(2) ibid., p. 197.</p>
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		<title>55. Why I Don&#8217;t do &#8216;evangelism&#8217;</title>
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<p><font size="3"><strong>Canada is not Pakistan</strong></font><br />
Evangelism in Pakistan was easy.&nbsp; I would occasionally travel in a bus with a pile of tracts in Sindhi with an invitation to visit me printed on the back.<a name="Link1" href="#Note1"><sup>1</sup></a> &nbsp; I would read a tract by holding it up high enough so that the men behind me would be able to see it.&nbsp; Soon I could hear them discussing the unusual sight of a foreigner reading Sindhi.&nbsp; Someone would eventually ask me what I was reading enabling me to inform him that it was a tract about Jesus and to invite him to take a copy. I was then able to hand the tracts out to whoever was interested.&nbsp; When people followed up on the invitation and came to my house, I invited them into a room that had a Bible on the coffee table and asked them if they would like to hear a passage from Jesus&rsquo; book. Spiritual discussions took place easily and comfortably because religious conversation is a popular way to pass the time in Pakistan.&nbsp; Moreover, when people left I often asked if they had any concerns for which I could pray and usually they were very open to the idea.</p>
<p>In Pakistan, evangelism was a piece of cake.&nbsp; <strong>Canada is not Pakistan.</strong></p>
<p class="RightQuoteBox">Coming home to Canada I discovered that those methods which made sense in Pakistan are of little use here.</p>
<p><font size="3"><strong>Methods that don&rsquo;t fit the need</strong></font><br />
Coming home to Canada I discovered that those methods which made sense in Pakistan are of little use here. I found it quite stressful to spend time with someone who was not a believer because my evangelical upbringing convinced me that I was supposed to &ldquo;give the gospel&rdquo; and &ldquo;win people to Christ,&rdquo; but I had no tools to begin the process without alienating the person.&nbsp; I wanted to introduce people to Jesus, but the cultural environment with its low tolerance for any suggestion indicating a need for spiritual reorientation negated that possibility and I was left without the opportunities I enjoyed in Pakistan.</p>
<p>As a result, I realized that I had to stop trying to do &ldquo;evangelism.&rdquo;&nbsp; So I did.&nbsp; I stopped approaching relationships with an agenda to present a gospel message.&nbsp; I gave up the sense of guilt that drove me as if I was responsible for people going to hell. I no longer have a &ldquo;plan of salvation&rdquo; that can be diagrammed on a napkin.&nbsp; I am free from the burden to &ldquo;deliver&rdquo; or &ldquo;win&rdquo;.</p>
<p><font size="3"><strong>Not a Lawyer, but a witness</strong></font><br />
There are many ways to be involved in the Great Commission and I discovered that many evangelical methods, often considered synonymous with evangelism, were not appropriate for me.&nbsp; My desire to engage people for Christ&rsquo;s sake is driven by my commitment to God&rsquo;s mission to the world, but my perception of what that entailed for the Canadian context was misguided.&nbsp; I thought it was my duty to be more clever than those with whom I spoke so that the answers I provided and the logic of the case would sway them.&nbsp; My understanding was that God wanted me to be a lawyer and deconstruct the defenses of the opposition in order to convince the jury.&nbsp; Such an aggressive view of evangelism as a battle can be seen reflected in a review of a book on apologetics that promoted the book as part of an &ldquo;arsenal&rdquo; for evangelism.</p>
<p>Instead I came to realize that God is calling me to be a witness.&nbsp; Witnesses tell their own story.&nbsp; My responsibility is to communicate the events of my spiritual journey when called upon: to tell people why Jesus is special to me (1 Pet. 3:15).&nbsp; I thought I needed to convince people of their need to change.&nbsp; Instead I discovered that my role is to engage people in significant spiritual conversation, rather than convince them to enter the kingdom.</p>
<p><font size="3"><strong>The Holy Spirit&rsquo;s Prerogative</strong></font><br />
My desire is that people follow Christ, but it is not my task to persuade them; that is the prerogative of the Holy Spirit.&nbsp; My role is to discover where the wind is blowing (John 3), i.e., where the Spirit is at work in a person&rsquo;s life. Moreover, Canadian sensitivities have made me very conscious of the danger of viewing people as projects through which I may fulfill a particular religious obligation.&nbsp; My goal is now to become a conversationalist who does not need to perform, only listen and respond. To talk to people I need to have a true relationship with them and engage them with a desire to deepen that relationship, not for the purpose of finding an opportunity to make a &ldquo;presentation.&rdquo;</p>
<p><strong><font size="3">Thinking like a Missionary</font></strong><br />
Fourteen years of living in another cultural context helped me to finally clue in that I needed to act and think like a missionary.&nbsp; That is, I needed to spend 95% of my time finding out what is ultimately significant to them, and how they think about and express their spiritual journey.&nbsp; Only then would I be invited to speak into their lives and be competent to do so.&nbsp; This is a key missional principle: the task of the missionary is to do the work of discovering the relevance of the gospel message for a people group, rather than providing a generalized &ldquo;plan of salvation&rdquo; that is assumed relevant but leaves the work of applying the message to the hearer.&nbsp; Such an approach often results in listeners concluding that the message does not relate to them.</p>
<p><strong><font size="3">Significant Conversations</font></strong><br />
I discovered that the method that is effective within the Canadian context is not the proclamation of a message but the development of relationships within which significant conversations occur. That is, I now seek to explore with people the ways they make sense of the world.&nbsp; People are seeking spiritual reality and significance for themselves but often lack the opportunity to express their personal journey to sympathetic listeners.&nbsp; Sincere and open conversation that respects contrasting opinions is both appreciated and enjoyable when there is no pressure to &ldquo;win.&rdquo;&nbsp; When a conversation partner feels free to be vulnerable about their spiritual perspective, it creates relational freedom and interactive space and often results in an invitation for me to acknowledge my dependence upon Christ and give him glory.</p>
<p>Jesus is the truth that this world needs to find peace with God.&nbsp; We do not need programmed approaches in order to expose the people in our lives to the light of the world.&nbsp; Rather we need to hear, engage and respond so that the light that is within us can shine in a way that does not blind, but illuminates.</p>
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<li><a name="Note1" href="#Link1"><sup>1</sup></a> Mark and Karen served in Pakistan among the Sindhi people with FEBInternational from 1985 &ndash; 1999. Mark continues to be involved in Bible translation.</li>
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		<title>54. A Call for a Complementary view of Bible Versions</title>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 03 Sep 2007 15:19:57 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Naylor</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[As a missionary involved in Bible translation for the past 18 years, I was disappointed with the tone of the article &#8220;&#8216;Packer&#8217;s Bible&#8217; now bestseller&#8221; appearing in the BC Christian News, August 2007 Vol 27 #8.&#160;During the course of celebrating the growth in sales of the English Standard Verson (ESV) &#8211; a welcome addition to [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>As a missionary involved in Bible translation for the past 18 years, I was disappointed with the tone of the article &ldquo;&lsquo;Packer&rsquo;s Bible&rsquo; now bestseller&rdquo; appearing in the <a href="http://www.canadianchristianity.com/bc/bccn/0807/01bible" target="_blank">BC Christian News, August 2007 Vol 27 #8</a>.&nbsp;During the course of celebrating the growth in sales of the English Standard Verson (ESV) &ndash; a welcome addition to a number of excellent formal translations such as the NRSV and the NASB &ndash; disparaging and unhelpful remarks were made against other translations and translation philosophies (such as the &ldquo;meaning based&rdquo; philosophy that lies behind those invaluable translations that provide the spiritually hungry reader with &ldquo;what was meant&rdquo;).&nbsp;</p>
<p>This unfortunate perspective was carried on in a sidebar entitled &ldquo;&rsquo;Dueling&rsquo; Translations&rdquo; in which three Bible verses were presented from a variety of Bible versions.&nbsp;This negative and combative attitude not only confuses the average Christian and creates unnecessary divisions over minor issues, but it undermines the benefits we can gain from the multitude of translations available to us.&nbsp;</p>
<p>I trust that there is a more humble and gracious attitude on the part of the scholars who worked on the ESV than is reflected in this article and that they promote their translation as one attempt within a library of valuable and helpful translations.&nbsp;Rather than claiming pre-eminence for one translation (a dubious claim at best), the church is better served when such articles recognize the complementary nature of translations which together reveal a depth of meaning and nuance of the original in a way that is not possible through one single translation.</p>
<p>A few misleading statements warrant comment.&nbsp;Dr Packer is quoted as asserting that &ldquo;other modern translations &hellip; deviate from what was said in several thousand places.&rdquo;&nbsp;This implies that the other translations have erred or deliberately misled the Bible reader to the extent that their translation is a distortion of God&rsquo;s word. Not only is such a claim disrespectful to equally dedicated and educated scholars, but it is harmful to those who depend on those translations in their daily walk with God.&nbsp;Rather than assuming that translation choices are a &ldquo;deviation,&rdquo; a more realistic perspective is that the variety of expressions of the original text provide a broader and deeper understanding of the message.</p>
<p>Dr Packer is also quoted as saying that other translations present &ldquo;what was meant but not what was said.&rdquo;&nbsp;This statement is misleading for a couple of reasons.&nbsp;First, it implies that the ESV provides &ldquo;what was said.&rdquo;&nbsp;However, this is not possible since what was originally &ldquo;said&rdquo; was given in another language.&nbsp;In order to provide &ldquo;what was said,&rdquo; one must <em>refuse</em> to translate and read the original text as it was written in Greek or Hebrew.&nbsp;Second, if a translation does not communicate the meaning of the original within the forms and concepts of the <em>receptor</em> language, then the translation has failed in its task.&nbsp;All English translations, including the ESV, must take &ldquo;what was said&rdquo; in the original language and rephrase it with English forms and words that provide an equivalent meaning.&nbsp;It is precisely this interpretive task that describes the work of translation.&nbsp;One difference between formal (such as the ESV) and meaning based (such as the CEV and TEV) translations is that the former takes great pains to mimic the idiom, concepts and structure of the original language with less concern for clarity, while the latter sacrifices the form of the original language in order to provide the meaning of the text in ways that communicate clearly to the modern reader.&nbsp;Both translation philosophies are to be valued and are complementary, rather than in opposition to each other.</p>
<p>According to the article the ESV website claims that &ldquo;thought-for-thought translations&rdquo; are &ldquo;of necessity more inclined to reflect the interpretive opinions of the translator and the influences of contemporary culture.&rdquo;&nbsp;This apparent attempt to disparage meaning based translations is a sword that cuts both ways.&nbsp;Translation is impossible without interpretation. Why use &ldquo;60 scholars who were expert in individual books,&rdquo; if their interpretive expertise was not required in a &ldquo;word for word&rdquo; translation?&nbsp;And where is the proof that these scholars are less influenced by contemporary culture than the scholars of other translations?&nbsp;Is the &ldquo;deliberate attempt&rdquo; to use simple words and make the text &ldquo;dance along,&rdquo; not based on the needs of the readers who live in the &ldquo;contemporary culture&rdquo;? Moreover, Bible translation is a movement of meaning from an ancient language to a modern one and thus must use the forms and concepts of contemporary culture <em>in order to communicate</em>.&nbsp;To pretend that the ESV is somehow a purer or more &ldquo;transparent&rdquo; translation than the rest is fallacious as the scholars of necessity engaged in an interpretive process to provide the meaning of the text for the contemporary culture.&nbsp;That is the <em>nature</em> of translation.</p>
<p>The ESV is undoubtedly as carefully constructed a formal translation as modern scholarship allows.&nbsp;But this does not put it into a category above other translations.&nbsp;Rather it is a welcome addition to other equally valuable translations.&nbsp;When this fact is realized, then the benefit of the ESV can be realized as it is used in conjunction with other translations.&nbsp;This can be appreciated by a quick perusal of the&nbsp;&ldquo;&lsquo;Dueling&rsquo; translations&rdquo; sidebar.&nbsp;A better title would have been &ldquo;<em>Complementary</em> translations&rdquo; for each of the translations provided a different nuance and perspective of the original that was helpful for the serious student of God&rsquo;s word.&nbsp;One example can be seen in a phrase taken from Gen 5:2.</p>
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<li>ESV: &ldquo;&hellip;named them Man&hellip;&rdquo;</li>
<li>KJV: &ldquo;&hellip;called their name Adam,&hellip;&rdquo;</li>
<li>NIV: &ldquo;&hellip;he called them &lsquo;man.&rsquo;&rdquo;</li>
<li>NLT: &ldquo;&hellip;called them &lsquo;human.&rsquo;&rdquo;</li>
<li>Message: &ldquo;&hellip;blessed them and called them &lsquo;human&rsquo;&rdquo;</li>
<li>TNIV: &ldquo;&hellip; he called them &lsquo;human beings&rsquo;&rdquo;</li>
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<p>The unusual form of capitalized &ldquo;Man&rdquo; in the ESV (indicating a particular interpretation of the Hebrew word &ldquo;<em>adam</em>&rdquo;) is clarified in the meaning based and inclusive translations as &ldquo;human&rdquo; or &ldquo;human beings.&rdquo;&nbsp;The KJV adds a helpful nuance by transliterating the Hebrew word &ldquo;<em>adam</em>&rdquo; which alerts the English reader that this is the same word as the name &ldquo;Adam.&rdquo;&nbsp;Taken together, these translations should not be viewed as &ldquo;dueling,&rdquo; but as positive contributions that expand the reader&rsquo;s understanding of the original meaning of the text.&nbsp;I trust that the promoters of the ESV will choose the humble and productive approach of encouraging English speakers to take advantage of the wealth of translations we have available to us.</p>
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		<title>53. Patriarchy and Understanding the Bible</title>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Aug 2007 15:00:39 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Mark Naylor</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[&#8220;That&#8217;s just NOT right!&#8221; exclaimed a woman in a Bible study I was conducting.&#160; The object of her disapproval was Naomi&#8217;s instructions for Ruth to approach Boaz while he was sleeping (see Ruth 3).&#160; She was correct in that she recognized the inappropriateness of such an action within our society.&#160; She was incorrect because she [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>&ldquo;That&rsquo;s just NOT  right!&rdquo; exclaimed a woman in a Bible study I was conducting.&nbsp; The object of her disapproval was Naomi&rsquo;s  instructions for Ruth to approach Boaz while he was sleeping (see Ruth 3).&nbsp; She was correct in that she recognized the  inappropriateness of such an action within our society.&nbsp; She was incorrect because she failed to  recognize the cultural values of the Hebrew context (particularly patriarchy)  during the time of the &ldquo;judges&rdquo;, which validated Ruth&rsquo;s approach to Boaz.</p>
<p>The Bible is God&rsquo;s revelation of his will to humanity given  within a cultural context that is very different from our situation today.&nbsp; Although the Bible remains God&rsquo;s revelation  of his will <em><u>for</u></em> us, it was  originally written <em><u>to</u></em> people whose  language, culture and worldview greatly contrasts with ours.&nbsp; Thus, the more the values, beliefs and  situation of the original audience are understood by today&rsquo;s reader, the better  the meaning of the divine message can be comprehended.&nbsp; Similarly, the more we comprehend our own  culture and society, the better equipped we are to understand how the biblical  revelation can be expressed and applied in our context.</p>
<p>The implications of this reality are profound for the Bible  translator and the cross-cultural worker as well as for all those who want to  understand the relevance of God&rsquo;s word for them.&nbsp; We cannot understand and appreciate the way  the Bible relates to us without first recognizing that God spoke his message to  people both <em>through</em> and <em>because of</em> their situation.&nbsp; To the degree our modern context is similar  to the context of original audience, the original message will have direct  relevance for us.&nbsp; However, differences  between the ancient and modern cultures require us to adopt a two step process  of interpretation.&nbsp; First, we must  understand the message through the original cultural perspective and second, we  must consider how that revelation can be expressed relevantly for us today.</p>
<p>The differences between biblical cultures and our western  context can easily be underestimated by the modern reader resulting in the  misinterpretation of scripture. For example, the egalitarian values of our  western culture make it hard for us to grapple with the pervasive patriarchal  values and assumptions that lie behind the Pentateuch.</p>
<p>The patriarchal nature of the nation of Israel and the  cultures of that time is especially evident in Deu. 23:1-10, which declares  that only circumcised males may belong to the &ldquo;congregation&rdquo; or &ldquo;assembly&rdquo; of  the LORD.&nbsp; The word used in this passage  is the same word used throughout the Old Testament to refer to the nation of Israel.&nbsp; The struggle for the egalitarian modern  reader comes because it is evident that only adult males were considered  members of the LORD&#8217;s congregation, that is, members of the nation of Israel.&nbsp; When the congregation or assembly is  mentioned in other passages, it is assumed by the modern reader that the <em>whole</em> community consisting of men, women  and children is being referred to.&nbsp;  However, in a patriarchal setting it is only the adult males who  constitute the essence and identity of the community.</p>
<p>Most English translations seem inadequate in their  translations of the Deu. passage since they often imply that the &ldquo;congregation&rdquo;  is a special group <em>within</em> the nation,  rather than the nation itself. However, the passage actually refers to the  whole nation of Israel  focusing on the central religious identity of belonging to the LORD.&nbsp; This was a privilege reserved solely for the  circumcised adult male. All others were dependent on the relationship with an  adult male member in order to survive and find their identity and meaning of  life within that community.&nbsp; This is the  reason for the ongoing concern in the Old Testament for widows, orphans and the  resident alien. The book of Ruth can scarcely be understood without a grasp of  this concept.</p>
<p>The modern reader can easily become confused or repulsed by  the patriarchal values of that time and thereby miss the revelation that God  offers. But the solution to this clash with modern values comes by recognizing  that God consistently revealed his nature and will to people in a way that made  sense to them <em>within their context</em>.&nbsp; The point of the passage for us today is not  to encourage patriarchal values and assumptions; these are not values that we  espouse.&nbsp; Rather we need to grab hold of  the truth relevant in our setting that we are called to holiness and purity as  we keep the LORD at the center of our lives and purposes.&nbsp; For our context it is not just circumcised  adult males of one people group, but men and women of all nations who are  invited to be full members of the congregation of the LORD.</p>
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